Reviews for The Challenge Posed
viha chapter 26 . 1/28
It's like you want people to write a
flame. I mean seriously is it necessary
to show kagome to be dumb airhead
who can't do anything right but blush
and wait to be rescued? ? (Or some other writer who show her like a goddess
getting everything right) She is a normal person who sometime succeeds and
fail other times. Please don't ruin your
nice story by writing kagome' s character
in unrealistic manner showing her
Reader4life chapter 30 . 1/3
I know that it has been a While since you updated...and that u were starting to get bored with ff... Happens all the time, it happened to me but i came Back and now i read stories in secret.. Because my ff friends moved on without me ...

I hope u find time to end this fic... It isnt more than 3 chapters i think? Hope to read u soon!
Faceworthy chapter 30 . 10/17/2015
I hope you understand the emotional journey you have lead me on hqs left me damaged and I simply must insist that you continue the story because I must have closure.
On a mild side note i have greatly enjoyed your story and I think you are an exceptional writer.
welliegirl16 chapter 30 . 9/16/2015
this story is a fascinating revamp of the series! i hope you finish it.
jarjayes chapter 20 . 8/29/2015
okay...yeah, I had to watch the 3rd movie.
Um, sometimes I thought the Inu no Taisho was quite sadistic.
He had a funny way of testing his sons.
jarjayes chapter 19 . 8/29/2015
last night, I actually watched the 3rd Inuyasha movie. Wow! HOw I have forgotten alot of details!
It's a good thing I saw it because now it was easy for me to envision what's going on as I read this chapter.

I was really getting fed up with Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha for being prideful idiots!
I honestly thought that Kagome was going to purify the both of them with her arrow.
Well, that's what I would've done. LOL!
jarjayes chapter 18 . 8/27/2015
VEry good!
A very good chapter before going to bed!
I'm glad this fic doesn't suck.
jarjayes chapter 17 . 8/25/2015
Suddenly, I feel like watching the 3rd movie again.
jarjayes chapter 15 . 8/25/2015
Very nice!
She noticed him wearing it!
jarjayes chapter 14 . 8/25/2015
I loved the interaction between Kagome and the leader of the hanyou army. It was really deep.
Oh, and I have to say I loved it when we see Sesshoumaru stealing away from the camp far from everyone's eyes just to open the gift.

It was funny how he confiscated the gift from Rin simply because he didn't want anyone else opening it.
He reminded me of a little boy, all of a sudden.

Oh, I'm surely glad this story doesn't such at all.
You write very well and you have good ideas.
jarjayes chapter 13 . 8/25/2015

can sesshoumaru say: He's being an asshole?

and the plot thickens.
jarjayes chapter 12 . 8/25/2015
good chapter!
jarjayes chapter 11 . 8/25/2015
Favorite Moment: First, he had to find a way to apologize for the kimono incident, without actually apologizing. Next, he had to get his claws on his present, without actually showing
that he wanted it. Then, he had to ask his halfbrother's miko to look after his ward again, while he figured out what the hell was wrong with his retainer, all while
not making excuses or requesting assistance from them, of any kind.

This was quite funny to think about! He actually feels bad but he doesn't want to stoop down to apologize publicly.
jarjayes chapter 10 . 8/25/2015
Very well written.
I liked this chapter.
I'm feeling for those hanyou youths.
jarjayes chapter 9 . 8/24/2015
Interesting turn of events here.
Thank goodness you didn't make it a sappy love story.
There is actually plot to follow.
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