Reviews for RJ & Stella
mariahdoby13 chapter 3 . 8/15/2015
Erotic stuff makes me embarrassed and scared
Guest chapter 3 . 12/1/2014
Uh... still not that great of a sex scene but hey, I guess it's better than RJ rammed into/entered her over and over again and (name) moaned "RJ RJ". So, as I said, you can get better.
Allie chapter 2 . 12/1/2014
Well, I guess this is better than last chapter. At least you dropped that thing where you split a short chapter into shorter ones for some reason I can't really fathom. This still feels lazy and it's not the best grammar and you need more descriptions, get into character's minds and develope it some more, but you're sorta getting better.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/1/2014
Under-developed romance, I feel nothing for it except some "huh?". The story as well. Bad sex scene. Really, really rushed. I don't think "thought of an idea" is gramatically correct. Of course it's not the first grammar mistake I've seen from you, but it stands out. You make everyone straight-forward, I wish I was that straight-forward, but it makes it redundant because it's in every story and it's starting to feel lazy. This sounds more like someone telling their friend about this fic they've read rather than an actual fic.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/16/2014
the first chapter was great,the end when they got married and had a kid had me in stitches XD and this chapter,was very cute and sweet, me and my bro are gonna play over the hedge right now X3
Nice but okay chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
Same as my name by the way could u do a beter lemon/Lime
T-34 legend chapter 3 . 12/9/2012
Guest chapter 3 . 12/8/2012
You should make them have a kid
ToeTag chapter 3 . 5/18/2011
gross man...
StarstruckbyGaga chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
woooowwww... -_-
anonymous chapter 3 . 12/13/2009
A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding gift a reader can sometimes,he just needs to get flamed to hell
WeissKnight99 chapter 3 . 9/20/2009
Pretty cool for doing an inter-species genre, but you should make it longer and make the Lemon last. Thats just a suggestion though.

Good luck. / Ganbare.
Little-Madman-of-my-house chapter 3 . 2/20/2007
a little porn...but wtf?
Little-Madman-of-my-house chapter 2 . 2/20/2007
It think i know where this is going...
Little-Madman-of-my-house chapter 1 . 2/20/2007
at least it's not like a porn story...
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