Reviews for Rain
A.Keith Baker chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
Wow. This is real good. Better than what I could do. I am really impressed. Blown away.
fAteD lOvE chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
it's so COL! hopefully u cud mayb write a story where padme actually kills anakin with a knife? it would be really interesting full of angst and stuf...and then meet up in the force?
x Rajah x chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
DrBeat chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
Interisting. I like the idea of Padme killing Anakin. Although I havn't written anything yet, it would be cool to see this in the form of a story, short or long. If I tried it would end up as a cry fest.
F.J. Stellar chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
I wasn't going to review, mainly because fan fiction poetry rubs me the wrong way, but the cute little rhyme at end ("Read and review, it's the law of the game...") won me over. I truly like the concept of Padme killing Anakin. While I don't claim to know anything about poetry you seem to be going for Villanelle-like feel with the "Curled up..." line being repeated. Interesting.