|Reviews for Evil Never Dies|
| Shirogane chapter 7 . 8/15/2006
Don't kill off Gin, and now that Vermouth knew about Ayumi, is she going to do something else other than telling Gin to wake up for her?
| Hikari-chan chapter 7 . 8/15/2006
You are awesome. I honestly really like your portrayal of the Black Organization members. They're depicted as such harsh characters in canon and in other fanworks that this is very refreshing to read. One of the things I like best is that their relationships with each and their characters are still believable, despite the more human aspects that you have managed to incorporate.
I admit I'd like to see a little more of Conan and Ai, but I suppose they're not really doing much in comparison to Ayumi, Gin, and Vodka. XD For the first time ever, I find myself cheering for Gin and hoping he lives. O.o Also, hoping nothing bad happens to Ayumi from being inside the Organization base. Well, well, well, wouldn't Conan be pissed if/when he finds out Ayumi was right inside the heart of the Organization he's desperate to take down. XDXDXD I *heart* torturing Conan.
Looking forward to the rest of the fic. )
| YumeTakato chapter 7 . 8/15/2006
I really enjoyed that chapter. D
| Akashi Something chapter 7 . 8/15/2006
Just like you said on LJ...lots of hurt/comfort and character explorations. I loved the chapter. Especially the chat between Vermouth and Ayumi. It showed human depths in both characters. Y'know, if Gin, Vodka, and Vermouth ever lived normal lives, I bet they'll be really awesome and nice people...
The most shocking part in this chapter, to me, is the part where Ayumi tells Gin that she loves him. I never saw it coming. It's so touching...
And I'm somewhat glad that the medics thought Ayumi was one of the proteges. I was wondering how you'll be working around the Ayumi-being-at-the-base part of the plot. And I like the explanation.
I wonder if Vermouth knows Ayumi as one of Conan's friends...
The last part where Vodka things "you and me both..." reminds me of a book I read. In it, there's a part about languages: "we" can either refer to "we-and-you-also" or "we-but-not-you"... I've always loved that clarification.
Very touching chapter.
| Shirogane chapter 6 . 8/13/2006
Ok, Vodka is taking Gin to treatments, along with Ayumi to the BO?
| Akashi Something chapter 6 . 8/13/2006
It was so suspenseful! First, it was Vodka about to be dead, and then now it's whether Gin will live. -is anxious- It was surprising at the end to see that it was Ling who managed to crawl all the way into the warehouse and deliver an almost final blow to Gin... I guess Gin was a little careless, but he had to save Vodka... Sigh.
I see you've inserted a little flashback to how Gin and Vodka met for the first time. It explains why Vodka told Gin that they might've met before when they became partners. Interesting. I wonder how old Gin was at that time...
So Conan and co. found Ayumi, but then lost her again. I hope that Ayumi has managed to get into the black Porsche and not get kidnapped again... And I wonder if Ai and Gin will have a real confrontation. Unlikely, though, from the looks of things.
Need the next chapter. :P
| YumeTakato chapter 6 . 8/12/2006
Ah! The suspence! DX Now there's more to be worried about! Argh!
I'm tortured so by this plot!
| Akashi Something chapter 5 . 8/12/2006
The relationship between Ling and Yusuke has been revealed. I can't say that I'm surprised, and I can't say that I'm not surprised. I guess I wasn't expecting them to be blood-related, half or not, but then it would explain Ling's hatred. I still wonder who stabbed (or shot) the woman. It could be herself... Do we even know her name? And the Waterloo... I wonder who that refers to. The Boss? Conan? Random guessing.
Glad that Ayumi's going to be all right. Hopefully, Gin will save Vodka.
Brief, but interesting conversation between Conan and Ai. I wonder if Conan will ever learn about Ai and Gin's past...
| Spent Time-Still No Name chapter 5 . 8/11/2006
Poor Ayumi. Stick in the middle of all this. And Vodka. Who would have thought that he can't swim. But then again, he is bulky, not fat. But if Conan/Shinichi, Haibara, and Prof. Agasa is heading to the docks where Gin, Vodka, and Ayumi are, then does that mean that the two groups will meet or that they will arrive only to see the results of the fighting? Good story.
P.S. for some reason, reading again the part where it said Vodka can't swim, I just this scene: Ayumi rushes to the side of the dock, anxiously searching for any sign of Vodka. Strangely though, when she reached her destination she seemed to suddenly stop. And was that shaking he saw, her sobbing at the sight of Vodka's dead body floating in the water or was it...laughter? So it was with ears still ringing from the fight that he made his way over to the side of the dock, filled with dread and anticipation of what he would find. As he drew nearer he gradually began to make out the sounds of splashing and yelling. As he looked over the side, he saw Vodka, flailing around in 6in deep water, yelling for help, saying that he was drowning. It seems that Vodka had hitten his head when he fell.
I tried to make it more descriptive than I actually imagined it. I apologize for the long review. Good story. Please continue. (Yes,Iamabithyperathemoment)(Actually,)
| Shirogane chapter 5 . 8/11/2006
Ling actually related to that Ushio retard, I did not see that coming at all, but it was nice of Gin to dive in to save Vodka. _ [so the tough man could not swim at all huh.]
Waiting for your next chapter, how long do you plan it to be anyway? Is Ai going to see Gin soon? [Will Gin found out about Shiho?]
| YumeTakato chapter 5 . 8/11/2006
Oh, the drama! XD I look forward to the next chapter!
| AngryPinkChibi chapter 5 . 8/11/2006
Cool story, I likee.
| Shirogane chapter 4 . 8/10/2006
GO GET THEM! GIN! Do continue to update, I love to see more of Gin getting this twisted game solved.
| Akashi Something chapter 4 . 8/9/2006
Ah, good, Gin realized that Vodka is innocent. But poor Ayumi. I didn't expect that Hi Sou would think of using poison on Ayumi to turn Gin and Vodka against each other. I wonder what is it that Gin scribbled on the paper... Some sort of code?
Hey wait hey wait!
Ushio (un)scramble is... Hi Sou... *stares* Wow, how interesting. No wonder that name didn't sound particularly Chinese or Korean...Definitely not Japanese...
And I wonder what happened in Ling's apartment...
| YumeTakato chapter 4 . 8/9/2006
Gah, the continuing plot twists. XD Oh, I love this story.