Reviews for Not Tonight
yoaihunter123 chapter 1 . 9/28
i love this ,
yaoilover chapter 1 . 9/18
i loved it keep up the good work
Murkley-NEWSC chapter 1 . 8/22
not tonight (guest): Yes it is gay. That's why it says in the warning 'graphic yaoi'.

Anyways, this is very well written for this type of scenario. I give this a 10/10 for it's awesome grammar and description!
Sensei Moroyd chapter 1 . 6/28
i got wet-.-
not tonight chapter 1 . 3/12
this is gay
Guest chapter 1 . 1/25
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Ciel is not amused dk-dc chapter 1 . 1/8
I love it...
LONK chapter 1 . 12/1/2015
10/10
SuperKirbyLand234 chapter 1 . 11/14/2015
Well, to the both of you I say thanks. This story was adorably sexy, I just love how you made Link and Dark Link act almost like a married couple; you know, when one of the partners comes home from working all day, they're exhausted and their partner wants to have sex, but they say no. And then they go "Oh screw it, lets do this", and does it anyway. It's totally cute and funny and hot, just like Yaoi should be.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2015
Wow that's perfect. I love it
Olo chapter 1 . 6/20/2015
Bad.
shombody chapter 1 . 5/6/2015
333
Hothothothothot chapter 1 . 4/8/2015
Its too hoooottttt *nosebleeds*
EvilBabyDoll144 chapter 1 . 2/1/2015
The ending was sweet. I love it!
MuteHero86 chapter 1 . 1/21/2015
Great story. Good writing style and grammar, good aspects. I love how Dark Link's orgasm was described, people usually don't describe it that way for some reason. Props. Good job for this.
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