|Reviews for Capitulate|
| theeuniverse chapter 1 . 3/14
So much perfection. This is one of the most well-written second person pov I've read in my life! (Accounting some classic lit and gorgeous novels) 4k words and you manage to capture the hearts of the readers. This can even stand alone for people who haven't seen Naruto! Well done! :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/17/2014
| sinfullyseen chapter 1 . 12/13/2014
sasuke's so eloquent.
| Allison chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
I really liked it. Sasuke did have the same traits as in the episodes, so did Sakura. I hope you are gonna make more fanfics.
| marypotts chapter 1 . 11/13/2014
this fic is so goddamn beautiful I can't even
| emmarumbelle chapter 1 . 11/13/2014
This story is superb, completely amazing, wonderfully written and just plain excellent. I know you wrote this a very long time ago and you probably aren't even on this site anymore, but i just needed to say this for the very off chance that you see it. The fic is painfully in character, it's sweet and painful and the choice of words in it make it seem... well: poetic. Considering how this was written in 2006 and how much the story progressed and things were revealed after that, this is breathtaking. And the recent canon confirmation of these two dorks just makes it all the more enjoyable. Congrats on your writting skills, i hope you're doing well :)
| chibikizumi chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
dang my emotion feels so wrecked and just overwhelmed. like.
seriously. I don't know if you'll see my review because it's 2014 and sasusaku is officially canon as of now and. The accuracy of your portrayal of sasuke and just how he feels has left me breathless.
this has got to be my favorite reads by far.
| ElvishNinja chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
This is so good! _
And now i'm feeling so emotional (thank you! pls keep writing. U r simply AMAZING!)
Now, i'm off to read more of ur other works :))
| DeepPoeticGirl chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
LITERALLY HOW THE FUCK. HOW THE FUCK HAVE I NEVER SEEN THIS BEFORE. IT'S SO UNBEARABLY PERFECT. I CAN'T EVEN. AND IT'S SO ON POINT? I WANNA CRY. THIS IS BEAUTIFUL. IM INCOHERENT I CANT EVEN I JUST. THE SUBTLE LOVE. THAT FIRST KISS. HOW HE JUST DOESN'T DENY HE WANTS TO KISS HER LIKE. I JUST. I CANT.
| NekoSparky chapter 1 . 11/4/2014
I loved this so much. Your words were incredibly detailed and it really made me feel the feels for this pairing. Well done :)
| KiunoNamu chapter 1 . 10/16/2014
I just want to say that i normally hate stories done in second person, but this? Wow. Wow, wow, wow. That was totally amazing and so heart felt. Perhaps most second person stories are bad because they lack the depth that you have put into this. One again, so amazing!
| hazelberry chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
This was a really sweet one shot.
| Pikapixie The Demigod chapter 1 . 6/19/2014
Hoo-wee. Wow. I like this- it makes Sasuke kind of abstract, if that makes any sense to you at all. I love how he reassures her without ever saying I love you- because that's just like Sasuke, isn't it?
| SilverRider09 chapter 1 . 6/6/2014
...I don't know if I should review of not...it kinda ruins the mood right after reading it...that's a compliment. The one-shots are really good.
| Elli chapter 1 . 5/28/2014
I read this listening to Halleluja, and my heart almost broke. You captured both their characters perfectly, especially Sasuke. Both of them are complicated characters and very difficult to write. You did an amazing job. This story is beautiful