Reviews for Tsunade's Heir
Cranky Monkey 699 chapter 2 . 11/1
Not just that but adding the O to the beginning of a suffix is a sign of respect. Jiisan being the more formal while Ojiisan being reserved for when someone is showing great respect to a grandfather figure
Cranky Monkey 699 chapter 1 . 10/30
Naruto means either maelstrom or fishcake depending on how the Kanji is done. In canon he was named for the main character in Jirayas first book tales of a gutsy ninja so it’s never been pointed out which one it is I think
Ahmed Chami chapter 1 . 10/10
Phoenix of the Maelstrom.
Jestersky98 chapter 3 . 9/21
I don't get it, why do you have 50% of the chapters as omake that has little to no comedic value and absolutely no value to the story? Are you really that bored cause I can assure you that I am after reading this
Jestersky98 chapter 1 . 9/21
I agree with most that the last name mess is simply put laziness and frankly a shitty choice
Senju is a whole lot more than a name considering what the potential is in their blood
I hope this story is good cause just the fact that you fucked that drags the story down by 2/10 points
Redhawk29 chapter 1 . 9/2
*sigh* I’m trying really hard to ignore this Houououou nonsense so the story at least better be good.
batman5540 chapter 1 . 8/14
The "guest" below me likes cock in his ass dont listen to him
Guest chapter 18 . 8/14
What is this bullshit was going well till this fucked up mission and all the bs you put in it come on man it's just trash
arsenicminds chapter 1 . 8/13
ooooooo im excited to see where this goes
palmtreehead chapter 35 . 4/21
That was a great conversation between Naruto and Tsunade, I especially love that you mentioned Naruto knows Tsunade’s statement is absolutely true - that though she taught him how to be a hero she doesn’t really want him to be one cos he’d suffer. I feel like that about my babies too. Thanks for sharing
palmtreehead chapter 27 . 4/20
Well I think this was a well written chapter because you’ve reminded me that most of us really should be trying harder to help others and share what we have. It’s truly horrible to think people like Shizuka do exist (beaten down for no reason), and they seem bat shit crazy but they do deserve respect for having the strength to keep trying at all. On a lighter note I am enjoying the fear of teasing from his mother Naruto has, I have three children and it seems an inspired way to get them to behave. Thanks for sharing
palmtreehead chapter 2 . 4/19
Thanks for the language notes, I find them quite enlightening
Ben Walker1 chapter 19 . 3/14
I tried.
I tried to keep reading
but my god that is the worst cluster fuck of an arc I have ever attempted to read. that fight/series of fights was so unbelievably confusing it wouldn't even work in a crack fic.
if you are still writing fanfics, for the love of all things good in t hi so world learn how to properly pace a story and how to not overload the crap out of your plot
Ben Walker1 chapter 4 . 3/13
good God, so many terrible name changes that serve no purpose
Xhock chapter 4 . 2/23
I get you don't like the surname Senju but was there really a need to change the name of all kage's?
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