I’m confused

Good story with her strength makes me wonder what an assistant whipping from Ramada would be like

I just had to reread this! Such a well written fight that develops one of my favorite characters Shizuka. I aspire to write at even a quarter of your level of expertise. I hope one day this story continues thank you! Another very impressive feat is that you wrote Sakura's character very well and made her useful too!

how could naruto become loudmouth(same personality when he live alone in konoha) if he whole life with tsunade!

Man what a story, one i really really enjoy. Hope youll one day finish this.. Anyway thanks

Well the reunion is exactly as i expected except for that one part where naruto grew...

I love that shizune was a super elite anbu.. Great thing to put for her character like that.. I was kinda wondering when we'll see tsunade pov on this a few chapters back.. Wish it was a little deeper about her thoughts in this situation.. Anyway great chapter how zabuza died with dignity was a really good touch

I mean you wrote like haku didnt have any agenda but for some reason haku still has that vibe.. I dont know if its from the show but i always felt like haku wasnt at all as she portray herself to be.. There was just something not right you know.. So i was always on the fence about her.. And yes the reveal was very interesting never would have expected it to be like that

Yes my view on shizuka has change between chapters and also this few chapters has become like another story.. I almost forgot what this whole story is all about... well im just really excited to see the reaction of everyone when naruto brings her home

I think i agree with you... This chapter, truly otherworldly amazingness.. Just, yes!

Yes finally a back story

Man naruto cant have a break

sir in this one when he is with her why not doing when Naruto and his mom Tsunade and others into it living in the whirlpool when then the house the 4 had is a old inn like house and when she had her mic and Naruto workings as body huther and when the money be in now form took out bad guys and woman like , when Naruto had the fox s like kids one can fly is like 8 and others he get too and when 2 set is call hell fire fox s when them more warriors ,he had them too when doing some odd jobs like spy and when took out the missy vaillge top ex officers out like a hulk woman Roberta cod , who had little kids to be killers and hit men too , like , Naruto had find her in the west and took out her and find money and a black book when into it help too Naruto find out she is one be took money to the others too, it help out too, when then money form it help too

...What? Houou Hananoki...? Houou Idomizu..? Sarutobi Fuuyou? The only Hokage that had their name 'typed' correctly was Namikaze Minato... Shouldn't they be Senju Hashirama, Senju Tobirama, and Sarutobi Hiruzen reapectively? Well. Names aside. So far, good story. I'm just going to ignore all the names that were written or 'typed' incorrectly...

Eh... I'm just gonna ignore this 'Houou' business or some shit like that. I'm so used to Senju and this is like the only Fanfic with their last name as 'Houou'. I don't get it. What about the Shodaime and Nidaime Hokage? They're known respectively as Houou Hashirama and Houou Tobirama too? The hell? Aren't they supposed to be called Senju just like in both manga and anime? Yes, I am aware and read the description before reading this, but just saying.