Reviews for Tsunade's Heir
qalleesyawesome chapter 17 . 6/7/2020
Man naruto cant have a break
robert krause chapter 3 . 6/7/2020
sir in this one when he is with her why not doing when Naruto and his mom Tsunade and others into it living in the whirlpool when then the house the 4 had is a old inn like house and when she had her mic and Naruto workings as body huther and when the money be in now form took out bad guys and woman like , when Naruto had the fox s like kids one can fly is like 8 and others he get too and when 2 set is call hell fire fox s when them more warriors ,he had them too when doing some odd jobs like spy and when took out the missy vaillge top ex officers out like a hulk woman Roberta cod , who had little kids to be killers and hit men too , like , Naruto had find her in the west and took out her and find money and a black book when into it help too Naruto find out she is one be took money to the others too, it help out too, when then money form it help too
Vinyr chapter 4 . 3/29/2020
...What? Houou Hananoki...? Houou Idomizu..? Sarutobi Fuuyou? The only Hokage that had their name 'typed' correctly was Namikaze Minato... Shouldn't they be Senju Hashirama, Senju Tobirama, and Sarutobi Hiruzen reapectively? Well. Names aside. So far, good story. I'm just going to ignore all the names that were written or 'typed' incorrectly...
Vinyr chapter 1 . 3/29/2020
Eh... I'm just gonna ignore this 'Houou' business or some shit like that. I'm so used to Senju and this is like the only Fanfic with their last name as 'Houou'. I don't get it. What about the Shodaime and Nidaime Hokage? They're known respectively as Houou Hashirama and Houou Tobirama too? The hell? Aren't they supposed to be called Senju just like in both manga and anime? Yes, I am aware and read the description before reading this, but just saying.
SPRH chapter 1 . 2/3/2020
man like Matthew Clements just said Hirashima and Tobirumu, no fam u didnt sound snobbish u sounded fuckin stoooopid
Guest chapter 4 . 1/14/2020
Have you ever read naruto
Matthew Clements chapter 4 . 12/30/2019
Hi. Love the story but I have a few problems. The first hokage was named harashima senju and the second tobirumu senju. And the 3rd is hirzen saurtobi. Please use the proper names fir the hokage. Sorry if I sound like a snobby jerk. Thanks
Cranky Monkey 699 chapter 2 . 11/1/2019
Not just that but adding the O to the beginning of a suffix is a sign of respect. Jiisan being the more formal while Ojiisan being reserved for when someone is showing great respect to a grandfather figure
Cranky Monkey 699 chapter 1 . 10/30/2019
Naruto means either maelstrom or fishcake depending on how the Kanji is done. In canon he was named for the main character in Jirayas first book tales of a gutsy ninja so it’s never been pointed out which one it is I think
Ahmed Chami chapter 1 . 10/10/2019
Phoenix of the Maelstrom.
Jestersky98 chapter 3 . 9/21/2019
I don't get it, why do you have 50% of the chapters as omake that has little to no comedic value and absolutely no value to the story? Are you really that bored cause I can assure you that I am after reading this
Jestersky98 chapter 1 . 9/21/2019
I agree with most that the last name mess is simply put laziness and frankly a shitty choice
Senju is a whole lot more than a name considering what the potential is in their blood
I hope this story is good cause just the fact that you fucked that drags the story down by 2/10 points
Redhawk29 chapter 1 . 9/2/2019
*sigh* I’m trying really hard to ignore this Houououou nonsense so the story at least better be good.
batman5540 chapter 1 . 8/14/2019
The "guest" below me likes cock in his ass dont listen to him
Guest chapter 18 . 8/14/2019
What is this bullshit was going well till this fucked up mission and all the bs you put in it come on man it's just trash
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