|Reviews for Tsunade's Heir|
| AlphaScribe chapter 34 . 4/13
Fun well done
| AlphaScribe chapter 33 . 4/13
| AlphaScribe chapter 32 . 4/13
F-ing Great. Really can't say enough about this chapter. Nice touch with the sword
| sketchtheunicorn chapter 19 . 4/13
so I'm definitely loving this story. The imagery you create is epic, reminding me of the show in all the best ways, and then pushing that further. I enjoy the detail you bring to each moment, and I honestly wish I had that kind of ability for my story. Even this chapter, with it's 'Deus Ex Shizune', was expertly done, and didn't feel like a cop-out, but rather a surprise twist. I enjoy this story immensely, and I will continue to read. Normally when I find a story of this caliber with so many chapters to catch up with, I don't take the time to review, as I just want to keep reading, I felt that I needed to stop and let you know: You are a great writer, equal to published authors, and I admire that. Now, back to catching up.
| AlphaScribe chapter 30 . 4/13
This was a great chapter, I love what you have done with Zabuza.
He's not this misunderstood villain; He's just what he is. He's an asshole, and a bastard, but most of all he is how I would see someone with his back round. Very well done.
| AlphaScribe chapter 27 . 4/13
She is bat shit nuts. That being said it is understandable and this gives great insight into her. And despite the fucked-up-nis of that she is, I have to say I like her. Thank you
| AlphaScribe chapter 24 . 4/13
Om my god I could not stop laughing. I have tears running down my face. I love how you balance the serous part with comedy. Good job And thank you.
| secretwhovianpony chapter 6 . 4/12
Oh my god, this omake is the best yet! Totally freaking hilarious!
| sketchtheunicorn chapter 8 . 4/12
there are two points in this chapter where Minato is referred to as Arashi, both after Naruto and Jiraiya get to the clearing.
| Lanaught chapter 40 . 4/12
fun chapter xD though i worry for the health of the princes with the different factors xD water clothes cold
| luqie10 chapter 8 . 4/12
Your jaraiya beatings are getting very mundane seriously tsunade only beat him up once. I really hope there isn't anymore of these jaraiya is a pervert beatings
| TitanSteel chapter 24 . 4/12
this chapter is so f*cked up in so many bl*ody different level that it's way too funny and confusing, and eye-opening and a lot of other things. really. i just could not decide whether i should cry or laugh my ass-off. and that's saying something.
| Galeiam chapter 7 . 4/12
Being written in 2006 its easy to see why this story is stuck in the era of Evil Konoha origins.
Hopefully the newer chapters move away from that genre.
| Guest chapter 40 . 4/12
Good chapter as always... I hope u never abandon this story and hope you update soon... Though it feels like this chapter was shorter than other.. Meh who cares :)
| LordTicky chapter 40 . 4/12
Didn't expect a twist like the princess being a shemale. But I guess that's kind of the point. Question, why did you change their surname to Senju? I know that Tsunade's canon surname is Senju, but you've spent 30 chapters calling them something else.