|Reviews for Wheels on the Bus|
| Azulira chapter 9 . 12/18/2013
THE REASON IS NOT A GIRLY SONG RIKU! I loved this fic by the way!
| Annie chapter 9 . 11/19/2013
Wow. That's was... THE MOST ADORABLE THING EVER! I'm dying. Pure love!
| chris chapter 9 . 9/26/2013
this story was awesome!
| mOOnlite-duskk chapter 2 . 6/16/2013
| Justice Tokidoki chapter 9 . 5/29/2013
Well, I have to say, this was an amazing read. You really developed the characters well, and the pacing was pretty spot on. Even with the shift in moods and the serious tones towards the end, I really liked how you set it up and the conclusion.
It started out very humorous and engaging, but in the end it's about two people who get to know each other more as they get through what seems like a horrible situation together.
I loved their backstories and the various games they played, body language also had a pretty large role in this story, I thought you did a great job characterizing both of them like this. And it is pretty realistic (as you've said before, not much to do on a bus ride).
So, great work! I am thoroughly pleased. This was a joy to read, no matter how long it took you should be very proud of yourself.
Thanks for sharing this story with us.
| candybear24 chapter 9 . 3/1/2013
that was beautiful
| Multiverse Fan chapter 9 . 12/23/2012
I really liked this story. It is well written and I really enjoyed it. :) Keep up the good stories!
| Otherguy14 chapter 9 . 10/31/2012
This was really great to read. At first I didn't think it was too great, but it improved really quick. I was interested in how you could keep the story going for so long just using an 8 hour bus ride, and you pulled that off really well. I also liked how all the characters acted, and I loved the last chapter and how the story ended. I felt like you did that perfectly.
Anyway, enjoyed the story and probably going to check out your other ones now, too.
| ChuckleBunny chapter 9 . 8/18/2012
| Springflake chapter 9 . 4/9/2012
Oh, I loved this! And I'm not even that into this couple normally, either!
| KC-Chan13 chapter 9 . 11/12/2011
Words can't even describe how much I love this story!
I ADORE Sora's personality in here. He's not the happy-go-lucky goofball everyone describes him as in the fics these days, so a bonus point for you. :)
Huh, I've always thought of Kairi as the 'perfect' kind, too. :P
Awesome story, keep writing!
| Kairi9898 chapter 9 . 6/17/2011
wow... wowowowowow! *v* AMAZING STORY! ABSOLUTLEY AMAZING! oh i like that little song piece at the end! it was sweet! :D
| maydayed chapter 9 . 2/19/2011
amazing story. *hearts* i absolutely adore plots like these where they have that whole love/hate thing going on. and your writing style blew me away.
i wish you wrote at least an epilogue! *sad face*
and also: *squeal* gosh, i love how Sora's such a sexy smartass in this story. people should write him that way more often.
| VenVen chapter 9 . 1/24/2011
VERY NICE! :D
| FELordRoy chapter 2 . 1/14/2011
this story is actually amazing. i love everything, especially the power of their dialogue as well as the movement of the story.