Reviews for Perpetual Smile
sasuke1342 chapter 2 . 8/31/2006
Awesome story. I can't wait to find out what the next chapter brings.
shinigami69 chapter 2 . 8/28/2006
great story update soon
Akakinzoku chapter 2 . 8/27/2006
...how depressing. But its still good. Thanks
Vegeta the 3rd chapter 2 . 8/25/2006
DAMN YOU ROOTS! YOU DESERVE TO PERISH! Uh, ...(ahem) Good story, very dramatic. Hope that smile comes off, it can be very scary and sad...
Horific Albel Nox chapter 2 . 8/22/2006
hmm cool chapter but the whole I failed the bunshin test and got a kage bunshin seems to be overdone in so many stories

will Naruto develop an ultimate defense like Gaara either way good story
Spice9 chapter 2 . 8/21/2006
interesting story. Please update.
Battosai25 chapter 2 . 8/21/2006
Great sory!

hope Naruto isnt on team seven (dont like Sasuke and Sakura that much)
Naruto1110 chapter 2 . 8/20/2006
ok
Monarck chapter 2 . 8/20/2006
wow, very deep. I like this, it is like a nice breath of fresh air, an original plot, the Naruto community is in need of fics with original plots. I thought it was hilarious that Hinata is scared of Naruto instead of having a crush on him. Are you going to follow the whole manga elemental affinity jargon?
Leeslotus1028 chapter 2 . 8/19/2006
aw poor naruto
Deziko chapter 2 . 8/18/2006
this story is so sad yet so amazingly good... ;_;
Shinigami3414 chapter 2 . 8/18/2006
So sad, anyways good chapter. I hope you can update soon!
ofdarknesschaos chapter 2 . 8/18/2006
yeeah. oh god the smile! O.o

next chapter please
ofsaltandhalefire chapter 2 . 8/18/2006
so sad well i like it soo update soon
ZWngDragon chapter 2 . 8/18/2006
*Sigh* I really can't believe that he let that comment get to him after all the mockery and stuff he probably had at roots. Kinda seems useless to add the last part really since, its all pretty sudden. Also, I can't beleve he'd let himself become a ninja he could've left the village or something. Ninja's are tools and they will kill so why did he decide to become one even if the Hokage said to?
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