Reviews for Perpetual Smile
Ellot Top chapter 4 . 12/26/2007
Here's another suggestion after the big fight Pein comes to he's aid (See the movie at the start of Shadow Hearts (the first one))
Elliot Top chapter 4 . 12/21/2007
Here's what I think you should do. The other Sanin want him dead. Naruto Fights them all but soon he on the ground half dead. Just as Orochimaru is about to kill him with he's Kusagi sword Sasuke with he sword is behind him and swings at. Orochimaru dodges this when Neji comes behind him and starts using Juken. Soon Garra and Temair are on Jiryia and Kiba, Kankuro, Shino and Lee are on Tsunade. Ino and Hinata pick up Naruto and carry him to safty with Shikamura (the lazy one) and choji but Shizine follows them.
TwiztidOne chapter 4 . 12/12/2007
good story i hope there is more
torgrim chapter 4 . 12/5/2007
Realy enjoyed this, can't wait to see naruto and shizune meet.

Brendan Nevins chapter 4 . 11/30/2007
Here is Some Jutsu I Promised:

Painful Sky Blade (Taijutsu) (Shizine)

Edo Fūmmetsu (Impure Sealing of Destruction) (Ninjutsu) (Orochimaru)

Sen'eijyarakū (Hidden Shadow Wicked Ease) (Ninjutsu) (Orochimaru)

Satsui no Yaiba (Murder Blade) (Ninjutsu) (Orochimaru)

Shi no Yaiba (Death Blade) (Ninjutsu) (Orochimaru)

Raikri Nirentotsu (Twin Lightning Blade) (Ninjutsu) (Kakashi)

Oborotsuki (Mystic Moon) (Ninjutsu) (Kakashi)

Wakaki Ikazuchi (Young Thunder) (Ninjutsu) (Kakashi)

Katon: Gōenka (Fire Release: Great Blooming Flower) (Ninjutsu) (Sasuke)

Kage Asshō (Massive Shadow Hand Crush) (Ninjutsu) (Shikamaru)

Kage Kisshin (Shadow Beating) (Ninjutsu) (Shikamaru)

Kage Shi Shibari (Final Shadow Bind) (Ninjutsu) (Shikamaru)

Konoha Raiken (Leaf Thunder Fist) (Taijutsu) (Lee)

Gōrai Rensa (Strong Thunder Lotus Chain) (Taijutsu) (Lee)

Shin Ura Renge (True Reverse Lotus) (Taijutsu) (Lee)

Sui Renge (Drunken Lotus) (Taijutsu) (Lee)

Hakke Sanbyaku Rokujūisshiki (Eight Trigrams Three-

Hundred Sixty-One Palms) (Taijutsu) (Neji)

Zesshō Hachimon Hōgeki (Eight Gates Bombardment) (Taijutsu) (Neji)

Hakke Shinten Kūshō (Eight Trigrams True Heaven Empty Palm) (Taijutsu) (Neji)

Fifth Kazekage Mode (Garra)

Rage Mode (Garra)

Suna Raishin (God of Sand) (Ninjutsu) (Gaara) $

Shin Sabaku Sōsō (True Desert Funeral) (Ninjutsu) (Gaara) $

Sajin S-geki (Sand Blade Double Attack) (Ninjutsu) (Garra) $

Nesa Bakuso (Hot Sand Waterfall Burial) (Ninjutsu) (Garra) $

Narutimate Entry (Taijutsu) (Naruto)

Naruto Lotus (Taijutsu) (Naruto)

Twin Resengan (Ninjutsu) (Naruto)

Nine-tailed fox Rasengan (Ninjutsu) (Naruto)

Rainbow Rasengan (Ninjutsu) (Naruto)

Gelel Rasengan (Ninjutsu) (Naruto)

Moonray Rasengan (Ninjutsu) (Naruto)

Chō Rasengan (Ninjutsu) (Naruto)
Brendan Nevins chapter 4 . 11/28/2007
You are a god/godess, keep up the perfect work, (Hint Also use things from Ruroni Kenshin and Buso Renkin, I'll send some Jutsu you can use in your stories too)
ApocSM chapter 4 . 11/16/2007
Love the story, update soon!
Kyuubi Fanatic chapter 4 . 11/12/2007
This could really use an update as well. It's finally getting interesting.
Panda-ahoy chapter 4 . 10/13/2007
Lord Leon Towasoki chapter 4 . 9/22/2007
a good start. i really like how you've put a new twist on Naruto being a weapon and then Sarutobi trying to help him out. plz update soon.
The Magnificent It chapter 4 . 8/3/2007
Ya...listen, I have an important piece of news for you. Updating should be preformed quickly, not every two months. It leads to less reviews, and can cause a story to tank. My advice, should you choose to follow it, is update, and stop making US ALL WAIT!
Ie-maru chapter 4 . 7/31/2007
Oh. Can't wait to see where you go with this. His meeting with Zabuza and Gaara and Itachi will be most interesting.

Can't wait for your next update!
crazyfoxdemon chapter 4 . 7/30/2007
great story when are you going to update?
ry chapter 4 . 7/29/2007
this is an awsome story are you going to update?
Ero-kun chapter 4 . 7/23/2007
Strange, I hope you'll continue someday.
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