Reviews for Whiskey Lullaby
sundes2013 chapter 1 . 3/31/2015
ok, now I read two heartbreaking team 8 fics. If you need me, I will be crying in the corner.
RinneLin chapter 1 . 2/23/2014
oh gods this story is so... sobering. they go away, one by one, vanishing!

beautiful story!
Fanwoman chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
Ah, I feel a little sad coming to the last of your "Naruto" stories for the time being; I've been having so much fun with them.

LOL I like Kiba's imaginings. I have my own theories, which I elaborate in one of my fic.

I can't imagine, given her family history, that Hinata believes in fairy tale endings, that anything is ever easy or perfect.

Whoa! You did what?

No way! Not BOTH of them!

Kiba still has Akamaru, and unless he's killing his dog, too, he darned well better not join his teammates!

Phooey! I wish I had read this one sooner so I didn't end on this one. Ah well. It was very dark and angsty, and I liked your use of repetition. However, I prefer a laugh to a cry, so this isn't one I'll be reading again! XD

Thank you for tasty fic!
Lover of Stories 24 chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
This made me feel like crying. Really... I loved it. You used the repitition quite craftfully, making it very recognizable each time - but without seeming annoying at all. Nice. ) I applaud you... Normally I don't care much for songfics, but this is definitely one of the best. Thank you, thank you, thank you for posting this. It's truly inspiring. Of course, I hope nothing like this will actually happen to Team 8. It's... just so sad. T.T
Baby Cougar chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
you made me cry too. i was singing to carrie underwood when i started, and i had to shut it off. now my eyes are burning. wow. you really did a good job in portaying this song to team 8.
EverloyalPoptart chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
no kiba we love you don't kill yourself! *sad* my goggles kikofreako you rox!
HinataMorningstar chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
you made me cry to.
shaedey chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
omg this is so good! i love the song, your story fits it perfectly
Inner-Hinata chapter 1 . 4/25/2007
...all I can say is no ammount of tissue's could soak up my tear's...this song fit's what happend to my stepfather who did 8 month's ago he died of drinking whiskey every night of his life basiclly I find it depressing but this was so beautiful I cant help but love it instantly faved...

- Inner-Hinata
Jen chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
While I am not a ShinoxHinata fan, this made me tear up. I love the song and love the fic.
Yumi chapter 1 . 2/16/2007
This is really good, strong. I love the repitition, and how the song is out of order...Really sad, but so well written I had to read the last line twice before I was sure that I was right...

OK, too serious. Here we go:

Oh. Em. Gee! I'm so totally shocked at this... so sad, I could cry, but everything is so subtle that I can't... Does that make sense?

More, more!ski
Firerose1300 chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
i liked it it made me cry i liked how it was Kibas point of view as he witnessed this suffering and breaking apart nd how in the end he was going to end his lonliness
unbeliever87 chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
That was really good. I like how you used repetition to accentuate loss, your grammer isn't perfect but that's about all i can fault you on.

Just Phan chapter 1 . 12/3/2006
This story made me cry. The only thing I didn't like was the whole NaruSaku. I never liked that pairing but whatever. As for the ShinoHina that didn't really bug me but I don't plan on making then a couple for me to read often.
Emeline Addy chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
(sobs) i love this song, and this story was so beutiful...
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