|Reviews for Damnation, then Salvation|
| Lady KeyBlade chapter 5 . 2/10/2007
| organizedcure chapter 3 . 11/21/2006
oh. sad. :(
| organizedcure chapter 2 . 11/21/2006
AH. HINTING, aye. I get it. :( Finalilly.
| organizedcure chapter 1 . 11/21/2006
I think you did quite well. :)
| Kyone chapter 3 . 8/7/2006
You have a good thing going on here. You can write with a small amount of mistakes and I can understand you, but there are a few times that I find myself having to stop and read a certain part or sentence again, due to a sense of awkwardness in wording. That's really my only problem with your story, and other than that problem, I really liked it. I'd like to keep reading.