|Reviews for Sweet Painted Lady|
| cheekycrumpet chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
I love this dear!
So unbelievably in character! :D
Now..that wasn't so scary was it.
| StarlaMarie chapter 1 . 9/26/2006
So sad :o( But with a very sweet Grissom!
| Completely puzzled chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
Here's the good news. Your writing skills are admirable. You constructed an interesting scene with functioning dialogue, narrative and description.
Here's where I got lost. I don't understand what show you're watching. Is just the same CSI I watch every week? I get you wanted to write something different, explore a plot idea... but when it's so OOC we can't take the (fairly well written) writing seriously-it blows up in your face, ya know? And that's a shame.
I think it's hard to pull something like this off in fanfiction. People want to see their beloved characters in a similar light as the show. Kudos to you for trying, but ouch!
| Fanplastic chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
There's not much good I can speak about this story. The entire idea of Sara as a stripper is so out in left field that the concept itself is laughable. The character exchanges were ghastly to the point that I actually nearly vomitted as I read. You take such a wonderful character and twist her into an abomination. There were CERTAINLY far too many 'honey's' spoken in the fic as well.
You have good structure and grammar for a writer so young which is fantastic, but the plotline is simply horrendous.
| JuanseyLio chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
well this is definetly a new concept, lol ;)
i totally enjoyed the dynamics between the characters ;)
| Ruthie-Ruthie chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
| Missy Holland chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
Damn, I cried over GSR! guess that shows what a good writer you are :D
| Aghast chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
This is just awful. It flies in the face of Sara's character development during the entire run of CSI. I realize you're very young, but writing this garbage just for shock value is NOT what I read to these boards for. Please don't do anything like this again, or if you do, please give a LOT of warnings so I, and those like me, don't have to be subjected to this twisted, sick mess.
| JesSickUh chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
I knew that this was gonna be OOC from the author's notes, but what got to me was that you made it seem like you took a small part of Sara canon (the DUI) and twisted it to make it even more OOC. I never saw her as an alcoholic, despite the unfortunate almost DUI.
| Claudia Lee chapter 1 . 8/3/2006
You CAN go wrong with a story that ends in "I Love You", horribly wrong. This piece isn't just wildly out of character, it's insulting to the character of Sara Sidle. Wretchedly and offensively bad.
| happiethots chapter 1 . 8/3/2006
everyone need to be saved from something, i'm glad that grissom did it for sara. really good story. keep it up!
| Zan1781 chapter 1 . 8/3/2006
You can't go wrong with a story that ends with 'I love you!' I'm a sucker for happy endings :). Oh, and I'm a sucker for strong Grissoms.