Reviews for Directionally Impaired |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It is actually pretty good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting story-line |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's weird how the 2 manga worlds characters mesh well together. Goodjob. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol, it's a shame you haven't updated this in the past 4 years. XD |
![]() ![]() Really cool. Maybe wonderful |
![]() ![]() ![]() subscribing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story! I hope you end up adding to it, it's just too much fun to languish unfinished! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think this is a really funny fanfic and I am looking forward to read the next chapter very much. |
![]() ![]() This entire story is wonderful. I loved the part with Kodachi and Saki. Excellent writing. I really wish you had finished this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story not what i expected at all update soon |
![]() ![]() Hi! please continue with this story! please 100x! |
![]() ![]() ![]() More please! I've only read one other Ranma cross-over and while it was good, it wasn't as funny as this one! I think you've managed to not only capture the insanity of it, but blend it it beautifully with the craziness that sometimes shows up in FB! |
![]() ![]() ![]() “Thanks for the rescue.” Ranma told Yuki quietly, “You have no Idea how it is always being chased by crazy women.” “No, none at all.” Yuki deadpanned. The Yuki Sohma fan club closing ranks the officially mandated ten feet behind him as they went. GOLD! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() *laughs* OMG... The way you write Aya is pure gold! Adding Kuno to the mix was priceless... XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Work on your characterization and description a little more, you utilize beautiful similes and metaphors. Once again the language is too formal, I don't think Haru would have her apologize because it would more likely embarrass Yuki further. You can include more emotional content. I love the inclusion of the Yuki cheer _ Personally I would believe that Yuki would win but that may be because he's my joint favorite character. Combine sentences if they're from the same person. Your Aya is wonderful. Nice ending that left me craving more ~Myst |