Reviews for Skies of White
The One Called Demetra chapter 1 . 12/21/2007
Dude. You wrote this sixteen months ago. What's your ish?

Secondly, prologues are meant to be deep and profound, the firs chapter is supposed to be light. Also, the summary makes no sense.

Thirdly, you don't have to explain comments if their good.

I'm picky. Tough toenails.
arial-96 chapter 1 . 3/27/2007
Wow this is a really strong story, it has the best detail i've read in a fa fic since ever, i don't quite know what you ment about the 'opening prolouge nothing more' but i do hope that it dosen't mean that your only writing a prolouge, even though i am pritty sure you did b/c it was writtn in 2006