Reviews for Birthday Lemonade Happy Birthday Darien
17mckinnvirgir chapter 1 . 5/10
What happens next do they have sex again?
Serenity312 chapter 1 . 1/20
This was a really good one shot! Nice job :)
krissy chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
wow thats fucked up lol using his birthday to his advantage
Jolie luv chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
like it
crazedanimelover chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
I THINK THAT WAS A PIECE OF SHIT RITE THERE )O( :( I MEAN SAERIOSLY WERE IS THE PRESENT? AND I WANTED MORE LOTS MORE SEX, AND NO,NO,NO I AM NOT A PERVERT AND I AM A GIRL BUT NO ONE CALLES ME THAT WORD BECAUSE I AM A TOM BOY GOT IT? GOOD!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
may i ask what was in the bag
P chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
How come I had never come across this before? Loved it!
Godschildtweety chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
Hot
Torisha Tanako chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
Nice story. i barely read one chapters and i have to say you made it worth the while. really good. loved best couple in the world serena and darien.
Kathryn chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
Dude this was awesome! i wonder what it was exactly it was... i know it was langere but what kind? heehee. it's kind of weird cuz' my bf, Darien, his b-day is on august 30th. CREEPY
SakuraLee91 chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
Wow, that was really great lol! I am so favoriteing that one! :)
RoyalLovers1418 chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
lol this was a cute one shot! so what exactly was in the victoria secrets bag that could make him go hard by just looking at it?
Sam chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
love it! xx
kennedy chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
it was much better than some. even those who have written before suck more then this. it was really very ggod.
sexybeast chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
i love it please write another chapter thax
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