Reviews for The One That Got Away
Guest chapter 5 . 9/9/2014
Hi! This story is really good so far, but just a couple of things...I realise you're probably American, but Harry Potter is British, so pants trousers and band-aid plaster. Sorry, but this annoys me a lot when I read fanfiction about British things!
fourevertris chapter 13 . 11/25/2013
Amazing, made me cry!
asdfghjkl chapter 13 . 7/30/2013
*crying*
ebdarcy.qt4good chapter 12 . 3/11/2013
Sweet! :) Loved it this time too!
AngelfromBeyondBelow chapter 13 . 1/14/2013
awwww this was soo cute! though i do feel sorry for erica but i love the story
Forever Siriusly Sirius chapter 13 . 11/4/2012
I am sobbing my eyes out. I hated you flr a minute there, i wanted to screm and cry and shake liyl and tell her shes an idiot amd make her love hjame.s i kept waiting after jame soured his heart out for therealization to hit her she still loved him and then it never happened.

BUT

God this last chapter was amazing, my dream came true! JILY!

Awesome amazing. Merlin i loved this story. :)
finnickohdear chapter 13 . 1/14/2012
I am in tears. This was an amazing story. Thank you thank you thank you. It's now one of my favorites.
musingmarauder chapter 13 . 10/23/2011
Love this fic! I loved the build up of James' emotions and his dilemma about what to do with Erica. I'm glad he and Lily managed to work things out in the end. Thanks for sharing this great fic. It's a shame you don't seem to be writing any more, but you have lots of fics I've yet to read, so I'm looking forward to that.
Ella chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
Great story, great writing! But couldn't they have just apperated to Moscow?
summersrain chapter 13 . 12/11/2010
I know this had been completed for a while but I just wanted to drop a review. I really enjoyed this! Sure there were times when I wanted to strangle Erica for no reason, but this was lovely. Thanks for sharing it :]
DELETED ACCOUNT 10123 chapter 13 . 8/22/2010
I really like it! It's amazing, does it have a sequal? It should. It really should.

I started this at 1:45AM and I finished just now, (My family...) it's really good.

-kath
WarriorsMelody chapter 13 . 7/2/2010
That was awesome!
Praise Allah chapter 8 . 6/9/2010
Obliviate is the spell that erases memories, however, it doesn't seem that that's quite what you were going for. If you want something to explode, use 'reducto,' or 'confringo,' or something along those lines.
Praise Allah chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
Sirius wasn't disowned in Fifth Year, he ran away from home and lived with the Potters in their Sixth Year. Then he was disowned.
Dusty Miller chapter 13 . 12/26/2009
That was a beautiful story, thank you for writing! :D
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