Reviews for Brief Interviews with Best Friends |
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![]() ![]() ![]() What's this? I'm getting off my lazy butt to review, again? Gasp! Anyway, I probably don't need to tell you what I'm sure other screaming fangirls have already said in their review, but I will say this: You have an excellent way with manipulating dailogue. The characterizations were dead on (again), and the flow was smooth. Espeically when Yuugi switched with Yami no Yuugi. The moment you did so was simply perfect, with the lull in the conversation. It almost seems as the change was POOF... sudden, though there is a transistion. Your fics always make me go Hee! with joy. Keep up the awesome work (and I can't wait to read my YxYY fic! HEARTS!)! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's over... so sad v.v A very good chapter! Keep writing stuff! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ROFLMAO XD HAHA Kaiba! LOL! Just way to portrait him! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was so amused with the "Who the hell let a teenager have his own company?" comment at the start of the "file." Oh.. so amused. This chapter... Seto is such a great character. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe, I love the beginning of chapter 4, Yes, who let a teenager run their own company? Very nice, you got Kaiba-kun down flat! I could see him reacting this way. Are you going to Yugi? I would like to see what you could with him and Yami. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *laughs* I love Kaiba... Love love love him... "Then you weren't listening..." hhahahaha |
![]() ![]() Of course Kaiba was huggable even though he's a complete bastard, I just love that. "X3 This chapter got me giggling, especially when he kept interuppting. And the ending line was great. "XDD The government versus Kaiba. Great job, keep it up! |
![]() ![]() Sorry I'm not logged in. Anyway, I've been enjoying this fic. I love seeing the characters from "outsider" perspectives, and the characterization has been very good. Kaiba is dead-on, this chapter. A few nits: you've got a typo (Untied States), and the correct grammar here should be "my company and me" (try saying the sentence and leaving out "my company and", and you'll see what I mean. Seto wouldn't be using "I" there.). Otherwise, good chapter and I enjoyed reading it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job. this chapter was pretty interesting. I thought it was funny how he played that little game with the interviewer. it seemed totally random, but it had a point. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a great chapter! This is a terrific story, I am very happy to have found it! The plot is very interesting. I do wonder where exactly this story is going, but I guess I'll just have to keep reading to find out. Very nicely done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awsome! kaiba rocks! i luved this little fic! i don't think i've ever read something like this, shich just made it even more interesting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG that is so what Kaiba would say. You got him down pact. Anywhoosles, I wuv your story so far so please update again soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant. You portrayed Kaiba perfectly! Only he would mouth-off to the US Army. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() You've got Kaiba's voice NAILED. Excellent chapter! One comment: "And for I know, this could be your attempt to wrap up this case by blaming my company and I." I think you mean "for all I know," and it should be "my company and me." It's a transcription of Kaiba's dialogue, and he's not a native English speaker, so maybe it's intentional, but somehow I think Kaiba's too much of a perfectionist for that. It stood out at me, anyway. |