|Reviews for Shadow Stalker|
| stealthyone chapter 4 . 9/13/2006
Well, Joshua didn’t do John any favors in this chapter, taking off in the truck like he did. Bad Joshua!
Sam had changed too. He was stronger, more self reliant, and more game for a hunt. But that need for normalcy was gone from him, and that hurt his father to no end.
Yeah, for Sam to give up on normal is definitely a big deal. That’s all he wanted for quite awhile, after all.
| stealthyone chapter 3 . 9/13/2006
Ooh, interesting how the car and Dean have just disappeared, and then how something is trying to make Sam leave. I love Sam's defiance and determination here:
“I wont leave without him.” He shouted to the listening night. “I wont let him just disappear.”
| stealthyone chapter 2 . 9/13/2006
Ah ha ... Papa!John coming to the rescue, eh? Always interesting to see him and the boys interact.
He sighed heavily as he scrolled down through the list of names, stopping momentarily on the name ‘Caleb’ knowing that it needed to be erased, but he still couldn't do it.
That's a great detail there, very realistic. Sometimes after someone dies, it takes awhile to be able to erase that person's name from phone books and such.
| stealthyone chapter 1 . 9/12/2006
Good start to the story, with Dean high on candy and caffeine and the brothers bickering. The tension between them gives the piece an intense feel right away.
“How many of these have you eaten?” Sam asked, holding up on of the wrappers.
“Not that many.” Dean answered sheepishly, a sudden guilt crossing his face as Sam watched him try to tuck more wrappers under his left leg.
*snickers* I love Dean trying to cover up the evidence.
| Colby's girl chapter 16 . 9/10/2006
Great story. I can't help but think that something is affecting Sam at the end of the story. Am I right? This hatred he feels, is there something still affecting him?
Thanks for not killing Dean, I'd be crushed...lol.
| alwaysateen chapter 1 . 9/8/2006
Wow! I love it! I'm glad I saw your story when it was already finish because I don't think that I could stand the suspense!
Poor Dean! I'm also glad you didn't kill him, what the Winchester could do without him? Again, great story! :)
| BrittneyRose chapter 16 . 9/8/2006
ASWOME! I totally loved this story!
| twirlerchic chapter 16 . 9/8/2006
Yeah! The evil is dead an Dean is not! Do smell a hint of a sequel?
| laughandlove chapter 16 . 9/8/2006
Oh, wow! Great ending! Everything worked out okay, thank God! You know, I would really like to see this become an actual Supernatural episode-the way you wrote both the plot and the personalities of Sam, Dean, and John just seem so characteristic of the show, and I would love to see it played out. The idea is better than some of the episodes out there, or at least just as good! Awesome story, I can't wait for more from you.
| Expendable-Mongrel chapter 16 . 9/8/2006
| Rhesa chapter 16 . 9/8/2006
Great ending. Fab story. Please write more
| rodney215 chapter 16 . 9/8/2006
So sad to see this end. Loved this story!
| shywalk chapter 16 . 9/7/2006
Loved it...Thank you
| LovinJackson chapter 16 . 9/7/2006
That was a great story.
I thought you ended it very well.
Thanks for sharing ur work
| I'mcalledZorro chapter 16 . 9/7/2006
Wonderful story! Ended very well! Great Job!