|Reviews for Remember the Breathing Thing|
| red-racer-fan chapter 1 . 11/18/2014
LOL I DIED LAUGHING (the awkward part was that I was in the middle of a silent math class)
| codyhobgood271 chapter 1 . 10/8/2014
This was a beautifully well written story I must say first off. I just loved this story to death. It was funny, sweet, and just all around awesome! Wonderful work on this masterpiece. :)
| chickadee1234 chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
Wonderful! This maybe one of my favorite fanfictions. Ever. You got everyone very in character, and the details you use are great and extraordinary.
| Fates My Bitch chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
Kenny's son and Bebe (I assume that is the mother of said child) must have gotten used to that. Love it though.
| PsycoGothicCreepyBear chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
This is pretty dang amazing. This story is filled with emotion and you wrote their situations well.
And I agree that this should be made into a full story! That would be super )
| Poochie-90 chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
I am sorry to send you a review so late. But I am so lazy...
I love your candy’s fanfictions. Especially this one. (I know it’s not a constructive comment v_v)
I don't know how to explain but I like your Eric, how you make his personality, his character, his psychology,...
| TheGreatAnimeFan chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
A cute CxW one shot.
| Doghanyou3693 chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
lol the ending was hilarious and you gotta love C/W
| TeamChaotix chapter 1 . 7/1/2007
I really love this fic! You did a GREAT job! I hope you make more with this couple in the future.
| MissMune chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
Oh man, this was SO funny and cute. You got Cartman and Wendy completely downpat It's so easy to imagine them fighting and yet being happier than ever. It just seems so RIGHT.
I also absolutely adore the fact that everyone was there for the birth. It just made me smile SO much. And when Kenny said that Cartman's daughter BETTER not be trying to kill his son every week for internal organs, I cracked UP.
Man, imagining a combination of Wendy and Cartman is truly terrifying.
Still...I can't help but wonder what her childhood would be like...
Great story. I'd be stupid not to fave this.
| TheyKilledKenny chapter 1 . 5/26/2007
Aw! This was a GREAT story! I loved it so much! Cartman and wendy...the way you did it was so perfect and South Park-y...oh my god I can't believe it worked so well! This is also the only "grown up" story I have ever loved to pieces, everyone was so in character it was impossible to hate the fact that they were grown up. You have everyone's characters down pat, complete, and you MUST write LOTS of South Park!
| Puddehcat chapter 1 . 5/19/2007
MAKE IT INTO A FULLBLOWN STORY GODDAMMIT! it was excellent!
| Solnushka chapter 1 . 10/21/2006
Dude..tis AWSOMe..plelelleleaasse continue man...pleeaassee..
Kyle:..its a one shot dude...
Me:..oh..danmit... well..uh..its a good story
| crushed by a dandelion chapter 1 . 9/3/2006
Star line: "Should we involve the authorities now or later?"
Lovely. Cartman as a dad would be so awesome.
| Seaouryou chapter 1 . 8/12/2006
Wendy in labor pains would truly be the most terrifying thing, ever. XD