|Reviews for the devil's dictionary|
| RoxanneTheGreat chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
What can I say?
| meowzii chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
i'm usually one to not review, it's just something I don't do unless i think someone really deserves it
this story, though it was more of a poem of sorts, is something I couldn't really explain in words, it made me sit here for about a half an hour thinking about what I felt, and you know what, that's good, for a piece of writing, it's really good
the last bit practically frightened me, I sat there feeling scared, almost as if that phrase of bold words just struck me like some sort of knife. but, there's just something about this piece that just got to me, and I'm not really sure why
the second I finished it I felt weirded out, almost uncomfortable, and though it may sound bad, I mean no harm, because this awkward feeling you get once it was finished, the intense topic, and artistic approach to it, along with the harsh simplicity of bolding such a statement/definition at the end, makes this piece so mind-twistingly gorgeous
just wonderful, really, and I'm sure I might sound like some sort of freak of sorts, but i'm really just admiring this unique piece of yours!I mean, I'm a terrible writer, so it's things like this that get me excited to learn more about what I can do to change an approach or view to writing ~
| oxygen-deprived-squirrel96 chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
either you need to write another or make this one longer...luved it
| plasticcandyx chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
It's sad in a way.
But i love the way you wrote it. :)
| Auxra chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
o_o" W-wow, Roxas being seme for once? My thoughts on this: Finky, short, and brutal. LOL. Otherwise, the story was nicely written and done!
| kupocchi chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
I REALLY LOVE your take on AkuRoku. Onesided and cruel; and Roxas on top for once. It's a nice contrast from the usual friendship fics floating around.
| toastyoats chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
Poetic in twisted fashion.
Short but (sweet's not the right word).
Enjoyable to the extreme.
I do like this portrayal of AkuRoku.
Keep it up, plz.
| poison-maestro chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
| Lily chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
Tough love is the only way to love.
| reeby10 chapter 1 . 5/25/2008
aw god thats sad! but really good... :D
| sally suicide chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
makes me wanna cry! ROXAS IS SO MEAN! i'm gonna give axel a hug before i go! *huggles axel!*
| LollipopLove chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
FUCK. That turned me on. It shouldn't have...but it did.
I think it's because up until now, I've never read such a slutty Axel in an AkuRoku lemon.
JEEZ. There aren't even that many words and it stirred such strong emotion of pity, sadness, etc. in me.
The world needs more akuroku smut like this ;D
| A-Crimson-Evil chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
Oh. My. God
I loved it.
Ok, that's an understatement. I adored it, I obsessed over it. It was not only amazingly written, but with such few words, you really covered in what I cover in like, a bajillion paragraphs.
It was gritty and dirty, and it was realistic. No mush, no fluff, just hard realism.
| Cyhyr chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
Well... that was interesting. Definitely the most unique thing I've ever read. I give you kudos for that.
I didn't know that alone could be used as a noun, either. "to be in bad company" sounds more like a verb or an adjective. Just saying.
| handcrafted4u chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
Ok, so, as much as I really don't like the guy around, we really need our Pope back, so if you've seen Roxas anywhere, just let me know. Ok, thanks.