Reviews for Brief Pausings
The Terrible Jester chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
nicely done.
DrowningInMySorrow chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
I like this, there aren't alot of Pter centric stories and it's nice to see one. This made me think about what Peter could have been thinking before he betrayed James and Lily, it makes you wonder how he went from being their friend to being an accomplice to their murder.

Great job!
Bagge chapter 1 . 3/28/2007
A very good picture of the traitor. The repeat of "Before he does it" frames the portrait of Peter in a marvelous way. Well done.
pistashimo chapter 1 . 8/12/2006
Wow. That was a realy different view on Peter, one that I've never read before. I like it, very origional and interesting.
Overhill chapter 1 . 8/6/2006
LIke the angst. This mood piece reminds me of looking at a painting, where something is going on, and you have to decide what it is. Reading this piece is like I'm standing next to you while you describe what you see in the painting, and you've done a very good job of it: I can almost feel the autumn air and can see the season's colors as Peter slowly falls. The last paragraph would be so "easy" to illustrate...(to bad I'm not an artist, or I'd do it...)