Reviews for Turmoil
UncrewedCandy29 chapter 14 . 8/22
Oh god that was so beautiful. I know you wrote that you won't write a sequel but seriously you need to write a one-shot about them. About their happy vampire life. And I love the way you use some of the Twilight plot and twist it around in your own unique story. I love it seriously I do.
Pinkcomet999 chapter 1 . 1/22
nicky trish chapter 14 . 10/3/2014
awesome i love it
Infinity Comes To A End chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
First off, did you really just praise Myer? She is a terrible author. Second, try using a bit more polish before publishing.
featherpen-princess chapter 14 . 4/18/2014
It's already 2014! :D and I don't know if you'd read this review

Okay, THIS IS BEAUTIFUL. The ending is too beautiful that it touched my heart almost made me cry, too bad there's no sequel but then, it's beautiful to leave it with that.

The moment Sasuke finally said Hinata's name through their hearts that was… breath-taking (Really can't find the perfect adjective)

Even if this was based on Twilight, I really didn't think of it as much of a Twilight inspired story Vampires indeed but then it's different in a good way, and I loved that! I love SasuHina vampires AU and thank God I've found this!

There were some parts that confused me but I no longer bothered as I proceed on reading the rest of the story. Again, good job!

Hope to read more of your beautiful fanfics. (I hope you're active again)
UrbanWonderland chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
I usually don't like vampire fanfictions... however, I can't help but adore this fanfiction. 3 :) I really love the unique writing style of this even though it is based of twilight it is very different and well written. Keep up the awesome work :) -Matty
sunhex1120 chapter 14 . 7/7/2013
Brickbrain the retarted seal chapter 14 . 11/12/2012
The first thought I had was that it was so much like twilight, and I just waited for you o do something that would've made me lose interest! But as time passed by I couldn't stop reading, and when I read the chapter before this I were on the verge to tears and pointed fuck you when I read what Sasuke was going to do! Then I just HAD to know what was going to happen, and lord I don't regret reading this at all! This was a really freaking awesome! 33
woodlandfairykirk chapter 12 . 10/12/2012
screw twilight. I thought the original was stupid but would definitely pay to read Turmoil(:
fairlysimple16 chapter 14 . 3/28/2012
Wow would've been a hood sequel but I understand :) I loved this story the ending was just just amazing! As was the whole story but well ya anyways... By!
meow-ee chapter 14 . 2/9/2012
I... liked it. XD However, I am confused. In the final chapter, was Hinata a vampire? If so, who turned her in to one? And how long did it take for her to wait for Sasuke? Please, please, please! Answer all of these questions! Cute story!
XxXUchiha SurayaXxX chapter 14 . 5/21/2011
hina noo! update! continu! a sequel giv me smthng!
mardocheline chapter 3 . 3/13/2011
kind of twilight-ish a little but i love it_
QQQniQ chapter 14 . 4/4/2010
The ending was superb! and I know some scenes are very similar to twilight but it's not twilight-ish at all! it still has a sense of unpredictability. :)

That was fun :) Thanks for sharing us a very nice story :)

narutonarutolove chapter 14 . 12/6/2009
omg omg its just so omg! they could make a movie out of this story! omng omg so romantic in the end! u have got to make part to or something, dosent need action just like they are back together, seriosly omg!
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