|Reviews for Let me be your moon|
| MoonlitClarity chapter 2 . 10/10/2006
I'm not trying to discourage you or anything, but you have so many exclamation marks where you don't really need them. And you have some grammar mistakes too. Do you have a beta-reader? If you don't, I'd be happy to help. But I think your story has potential so just keep working at it and I'm sure it'll be great in no time. Good work!
| ddh1973 chapter 2 . 10/9/2006
Wonderful chapter. I am glad that she found the letter, maybe it will be just what is needed for them to both confess their feelings for each other.
| Kat.D chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
Wouldn't mind reading more of this ... good start! :)
| ddh1973 chapter 1 . 8/6/2006
Interesting start. Please update soon.