Reviews for Pretend World
EuphratesLeap chapter 9 . 10/23/2017
Goodness gracious, I would love it if you updated :0 Excellent work so far! The idea is creative and original, the characters are awesome, and the whole world just wants me to read more! By far my favorite Harry Potter Fanfiction, and that's saying something! Please update when you can! I'd hate to see this story fade when its getting good! :)
Guest chapter 9 . 4/10/2015
i really want to know how nobody knows harry and why he ended up in a reverse world
deathgrunty chapter 9 . 10/23/2014
Carey I think needs a little push from Harry. You know what's great about stories, is the characters development how they turn out in the end or handle an obstacle they encounter. Carey may be timid at first but being in Hufflepuff means she's loyal. No one may not look at her at first, but maybe in the progression of your story you may make her into a great character. Besides if Fred has taken a liking to Carey maybe just maybe she'll find friends that way.
Ghoul99 chapter 9 . 10/8/2014
Update please
Ceti H. Black chapter 9 . 7/26/2014
It's so sad that this fic was abandoned... :(
SuperSaiyanTeemo chapter 9 . 4/1/2014
I think carey is fine, very interesting story so far, especially with draco being bwl
PhantomhiveMocca chapter 9 . 11/7/2013
Well , me too . I don't much like this chapter . But it's okay coz you make curious. *gigle* I don't mind it .
Oh , i like carey be more childish , maybe . More like cute little sister . And which house Harry ?
And are they can't use Potter's vault ?
I want to Harry help Carey make over . Coz it seems this Harry have sense of fashion .
musme chapter 9 . 6/9/2013
I love it!
darygirl chapter 9 . 7/30/2012
This story is amazing and unique! please can you carry on with it! i want to see how harry and draco end up! 3 thank you .
Niamh Cullen chapter 9 . 3/2/2011
this was really good. please update soon!
DDwelling chapter 9 . 2/12/2011
interesting story!
6473634Deactivated chapter 9 . 7/9/2010
hey great story :) if you like the weasley twins i have a story about em you could check it out?
Laura-Ann chapter 9 . 5/25/2010
I love your story, I definately haven't read anything like it before, however it seems you haven't updated in about 3 and a half years. If you are going to continue could you please update quickly. If you aren't going to continue could you please pass the story on to someone else and give them a basic storyline so they can continue writing it? If you could that would be great. (:

Keep writing. (:

Laura-Ann xxx (:
My Solitude chapter 9 . 3/30/2010
Carey's ok. It looks like there's something going on between her and George. Well, I hope you update.
brightsun89 chapter 9 . 8/23/2009
I love it! are you continuing this story? please say you are! I want to see what happens next! no more cliff hanger, please, please with sugar on top!
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