Reviews for Bobby's Accident
znogo666 chapter 1 . 12/15/2014
Keep trying
SLPikachu chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
That was pretty good
Spaminator chapter 1 . 12/26/2006
What was that? When you're writing dialogue you don't put in brackets. You didn't have enough description towards the end. You didn't write Connie in character, she wouldn't normally disobey her father. Everyone knows that Khan calls Connie Khan Jr. because thats why everybody calls her Connie, she's named after him.
Jemascola chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
Nice job, I liked this story, I thought it was pretty good.