Reviews for Firstborn
charmedgrl4ever chapter 14 . 1/15/2007
konban wa

Aw ... That doesn't even begin to cover it. Cole is the sweetest father ever! I have a question, though: Are the baby-orbs in the shape of a baby or just a blob of orbs?

OMG - Cole is so LOVING! He's SO sweet! *sniffle* I wanted to cry this chappie, seriously! *sigh* Back to the "joys" of reality ... Please update soon so that I can be sucked into this fictional world again asap! I NEED IMAGINATION TO SAVE ME FROM SCHOOL! And my brain is too fried to think, so can you please do the thinking for me? *wink* I can't wait to read the next chappie - gute nacht

Khudafis

-Shan-
WelshCanuck chapter 13 . 1/15/2007
Great fic. I just read it all well all thats there anyway. And i wont kill you for such a Coop/Phoebe chatper I like them together
fanlay chapter 13 . 1/15/2007
great story, i wonder if i'll get to see more of paige and henry, i really love them together..

hope you update soon!
bunn2007 chapter 13 . 1/14/2007
i like this story. i was thinking to myself that i hadn't been reading much of chamred anymore and i should start again. so this was a good one. i really did like the coop vs cole thing and that coop won. like i LOVE cole and i think he and phoebe really were meant to be, but after so long...and coop (although he was rushed at the end of 8th...) does make phoebe happy and his name starts with a C. so i think anything post 8th needs to be ph/coo and you did well with it. i personally reccomend ending this story here. you've tied things up and given it a real ending but there is some openings to be played with. and if you play those cards right, then you could possibly spin it ph/col.
charmedgrl4ever chapter 9 . 1/14/2007
konban wa

So I decided to take a look since I had time tonight, and I must say I'm surprised. I'm really not very into fics that are about the sisters' love-lives, but this has a really cool plot. It really held my attention. What surprised me more is that I usually have a hard time reading this type - the screenplay type - since it's all just dialogue. I have a hard time keeping focused when it's written that way. I don't know how you did it, but you really kepy my attention! The plot was great, and I can't wait to finish reading - unfortunately, a girl's gotta sleep *sigh* I'll continue tomorrow, hopefully. Talk to you soon! Gute nacht

Khudafis

Besitos

-Shan-
bajacks chapter 13 . 1/14/2007
Glad that you're back. Can't wait for the next update. Although, I can't help hoping that it will be Phoebe and Cole in the end.
Joka Popcorn chapter 12 . 1/6/2007
I love this story it is so real and intense. i cnt wait 4 der next chapter. plzz update soon.
Melinda Turner Halliwell chapter 12 . 12/26/2006
too bad you can't write this anytime soon.

but i trully understand you, school is so hard.

anyway hope to read an update soon!

Bye!
AshaXxX chapter 12 . 12/7/2006
I wish you all the best and hope you will come back soon

Thanks again for your wonderfull story I enjoyed every second
stuffoholic chapter 12 . 12/7/2006
Happy Holidays!

I can't wait for you to come back and keep writing the story
Truth Is What You Make Of It chapter 12 . 12/5/2006
understandable

if your going to be coming back within a month then its not that big of a deal most writers take longer than that 2 write a chapter
AngelicRose8 chapter 11 . 11/4/2006
This is beautiful!

I hope it ends with Pheobe/Cole together.
AnimeAlexis chapter 11 . 10/30/2006
Ok, see that's not fair. You can't just leave it there! Update soon please!
The Outlaw Witch chapter 11 . 10/29/2006
Great story so far and I hate *glares* cliffhangers! I want to know what happens!
Truth Is What You Make Of It chapter 11 . 10/29/2006
THIS IS SO SAD

I STILL THINK SHE WAS MEANT TO BE WITH COLE AND THE ONLY REASON THE ELDERS SENT SUPID WAS BECAUSE HE HAS THE POWER OF LOVE AND HES BASICALLY CAUSING HER TO FEEL THAT LOVE FOR HIM A FALSE LOVE
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