|Reviews for Dusk 'Til Dawn|
| Dell chapter 24 . 4/20/2013
Why is she being so mean to Edward?! Has she some kind of memory impairment?! He didn't do anything wrong, he came back for her but Vivian had already dragged her off! How is she so willing to just forgive and forget the fact that Vivian and Zane are remorseless murderers! And she's acting like a spoilt, selfish brat, saying she's "up for grabs", after cheating on Edward and treating him so despicably. She's pretty cocky, thinking he's going to chase after her and still want to love her after that little performance.
I think Bella and Edward are both quite OOC here. And I don't like this new character Bella's come up with for herself. She had better not end up with Zane, and Edward had better make her do some serious grovelling before he takes her back.
| graham5833 chapter 40 . 1/21/2012
Fantastic stories just apitty in not a book 4 it wood make mrs meyer jelous
| Siriusmunchkin chapter 3 . 9/29/2011
Real werewolves? That's different.
| Siriusmunchkin chapter 2 . 9/29/2011
Pushing the envelope a little Bella? And what is Jake doing at a Forks High dance? Another errand for Billy? What did Alice see that sent the Cullen's outside?
| Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
Interesting beginning. Bella is trying her best to get Edward to change her. He's resisting as usual. So what will the new year in school bring?
| Fee-Sha16 chapter 40 . 12/28/2010
AWESOME STORY! i LOVED it, GREAT JOB!]
| tds88 chapter 40 . 11/14/2010
I could have sworn I reviewed this story when I finished but couldn't find the review anywhere, so here it is.
While reading this story I was completely engulfed in it. The characters, plot and writing was wonderful. It was very creative, the way you came up with Zane and the werewolves in the story.
At times there did seem like parts that were unrealistic in my minds eye but that is wholly because I have read all the books now and several fan fictions that have given me a full concept of who Bella and Edward are.
Taking that into consideration, your story was one of the best I have read so far. You have a gift for writing, so don't let anyone discourage you from doing so. Well done.
| xTwilightLoverbethiex chapter 40 . 9/10/2010
Wow just finished this.. AMAZING!
Just wow! xx
| Reader chapter 40 . 4/11/2010
GG, if you hate and complain so much about a story that is so severely OCC, offensive, and disgusting, how about you don't waste your time going through forty chapters of a story? If you feel so compelled to go out of your way to read something that you think is so awful, you desperately need to go and find better ways to invest your time.
And, considering this story IS good, and has proof of hundreds of reviews, as well as hundreds of fans of this story singing its praises, how about you do the same and invest your time in something productive and read something you like? Maybe then someone might be able to take your own sad attempts at literary criticism seriously. The fact that this story was so obviously undesirable to you and that you went out of your way to continue reading it anyway already speaks novels about you and takes away from your credibility as a reviewer. Also, considering you cannot even articulate yourself with even half as much skill as the writer of this story that you found so "disgusting" shows maybe you need to work on your writing before you go and criticize someone else's.
How about you get a life and invest your time in something noteworthy? Going out of your way to read and review something and criticize someone who is obviously talented and came up with a compelling, interesting story that has entertained others when you yourself don't display even anything relatively close to a semblance of writing finesse is about as utterly ridiculous as what your reviews claim. How about you show yourself as a serious reader and writer before you go and make the claims you did? Writing like a sloppy third grader texting his/her friend or writing a note in class, and going out of your way reading forty chapters of a story - not the shortest investment of your time - that you felt was so awful really does not establish you as such.
Yes, I am an angry reviewer. I really enjoyed this story, and considering fanfiction is a forum for writers to develop their writing skills and display their works for others to read, enjoy, and provide feedback is what makes this site so great. However, it's reviewers like you that offer no form of constructive criticism, who demean this site and, quite frankly, piss me off. If you do not like a story, that's completely fine, but have some class and show some form of constructive review articulating what you thought might need some work. Blatant rudeness and insults get no one anywhere, and only reveal how truly unskilled you are in articulating yourself. That being the case, if you are unable to even explain your feelings about someone's writing that you do not necessarily agree with, how about you spare everyone from having to witness your utter lack of finesse and not write anything at all? Writers here work very hard to put out their works, and of course they are open to criticism, but there's a difference between a constructive review and just plain bashing. If you want to do the latter, save it for your friends and your chats, where you can talk in whatever manner you choose and they will put up with it because they know and hopefully accept you. However, do not waste a writer's time, who invested a lot of themselves in writing and putting something like this out there, just so you can get whatever temporary enjoyment you got in feeling like you "expressed" yourself and your feelings.
This writer obviously shows concern for his/her fans, as seen in his/her AN to reviewers, acknowledging their input and showing sincere appreciation for their feedback. What's disgusting to me is that you go out of your way to demean this person's writing, and you do so with a huge lack of class and articulation. I thoroughly enjoyed this sequel to Twilight, almost moreso than the following sequels Meyer came out. Not only was it original in plot, but it maintained a similar voice and tone that Meyer produced with Twilight, which is not an easy task for any writer. I fell in love with this story, its original characters, and feel the writer is extremely talented and conveys a true sense that he/she cares about what his/her readers think. I hate to think of what the writer must have felt, reading how you so rudely displayed your input here, and how your reviews were in great contradiction with everything you said.
Hopefully you will take this as a learning experience. Criticism is fine, but how about you work on your own writing before your feel any sense of entitlement to critique others'? The fact that I am taking the time to address you personally should show how much I do love this story, and how absolutely atrocious your actions have been. This writer has fans, which is more than you can say for yourself.
| gg chapter 40 . 4/10/2010
she cheats her husband, really shameful... OOC that could never happen
| gg chapter 20 . 4/10/2010
i think i might get sik any minute now... ì'm sorry for being rude, but this is just disgusting... are you for real?
| gg chapter 19 . 4/10/2010
no no no... what are you doing? i hope there is a really really good explanation for this part of you story...i am getting tired of all this edward leaving bella thing... but i will keep reading to find out how are you going to fix this!
| gg chapter 17 . 4/10/2010
edward will never ever leave her like that... this is to OCC
| lily chapter 16 . 4/10/2010
oh come on! this is just.. too much! i know this is just a story... but come on... those two together? no way...she can't be whit someone she hates, and forget all about edwar... you've gone crazy
| gg chapter 15 . 4/10/2010
o come on! this is getting more and more ridiculous by the minute... who would react like that if they were kidnapped? and bella can't be falling for the werewolf, al least not for this one...