|Reviews for Organization 101|
| GloomyPearl chapter 8 . 9/18/2010
*growls* dude! Goddamnit, I've been waiting for an update for TWO years now! Not counting the fact that I've been following (and loving) this fanfic for at least four years... *rolls on the floor in anguish*
If I'm not mistaken in chapter eight you said that it'll finish with chapter ten, right? Then can you post them please? Come on do a poor fan a favor! Please? PLEASE? DX
| Hayley chapter 3 . 4/6/2009
I decided that my reviews were short so I'd put them into one...lol.
Very enjoyable read so far.
Awesomely hilarious use of dialogue.
Sounds like a promising storyline!
In the fight scene with Roxas and Cloud, calling them
'the blonde' is a bad choice of words, since they're
both blonde. It was hard to tell at times who was
And this sentence here: "Axel successfully managed to capture the girl, gripped her arms painfully in his hands, burning her slightly, making her scream in pain and turned her around, her back close to his chest, her hands behind her back in an immobile position." is way too long.
LOL Luxord losing cards to Larxene. That's priceless.
Love the story so far!
| Melodious Authoress chapter 8 . 6/30/2008
wah! update soon please!
| Melodious Authoress chapter 7 . 6/30/2008
HOLY SHPIT! ahem. If you will excuse me I have to clean up my nosebleed.
| Melodious Authoress chapter 6 . 6/30/2008
omfg! I laughed until I cried when I read "gangbanged by a bunch of bald-headed Twinkie eating grandfathers" XD
| Melodious Authoress chapter 3 . 6/30/2008
yowza! naughty naughty!
| Melodious Authoress chapter 2 . 6/30/2008
rofl! they're so mean to each other.
| Melodious Authoress chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
rofl oversized rock. XD Omg I died lauging
| eCZi chapter 8 . 6/29/2008
"Hey now, no need to insult," I retorted, unable to stop the comment flying past my lips. No one insulted me, big sword or not. "What's with the sword, man? Trying to make up for something?"
THAT IS MY FAVOURITE LINE OF ALL KINGDOM HEARTS FANDOM EVER NOW.
Ahahaha...I'm sorry, I usually don't talk in all caps.
(If I do, I'm exaggerating quite strongly.)
But I really like that line...XP
Tsktsk, Roxas, you've got yourself a dirty mouth...
But, that's all right, sets the mood for it all.
I wonder is Sephiroth's trying to boink him, too.
GUh...I'l leaving now.
Beautiful chapter, btw.
| tessa the dinosaur chapter 8 . 6/28/2008
dun dun dun
XD keep writing :)
| Red Dye Number Three chapter 5 . 6/28/2008
This is majorly cute, but on the last line, of this chapter, I think the line that you want is "I blanched." It means that he pales from shock and embarassment.
Anyway, good job!
| SkyeFlyte chapter 8 . 6/27/2008
Can't wait to see what happens next, congrats on 50 reviews!
| eCZi chapter 7 . 4/3/2008
This fic is HILARIOUS!
I'm so sorry that I didn't review all the chapters...
that would've been nice
I was too distracted trying to read the STORY!
she said "boinking"
Seriously...this fic was really, REALLY HILARIOUS.
PLEASE, UPDATE SON!
And keep up the good work.
| Plain Jane Is A Vampire chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
This is funny and rather interesting, nice job.
| JadeEx chapter 1 . 9/7/2007
you need...to update.
this is one of my favorite stories.
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT !
and you are doing an excellent job.
so PLEASE, PLEASE, update soon.