Reviews for Callow Lamb
Katara Tojiro chapter 1 . 10/22/2017
I almost feel bad for Hidan, seeing what goes on in his mind when he has to kill people for his rituals. That poor girl though... She honestly reminded me of me and so many other people that I know. I guess that that is why it is classified as a "horror" fic, because Hidan's victim could be anyone(who is a virgin, I guess). Congrats on another fic that is totally amazing( I really don't know whether to put an exclamation point or a period at the end of this sentence).
Kris Senju chapter 1 . 4/4/2016
hmm i enjoyed this. its like an inside view of his head. i guess he does smile innocently but then again a part of him hurts but his faith its strong to break easily. that poor girl.
Smitti chapter 1 . 3/20/2016
Wonderfully written. Makes me wish we'd seen more of Hidan
lazylust chapter 1 . 6/29/2015
This was way better than I thought it'd be.
When I read that first line and thought, "oh no not another OC story" I very nearly exited the page right then. But I decided why not read a few more paragraphs I mean this author is pretty good and MY GOD I'M SO HAPPY I DID BECAUSE WOW-
and the OC was pretty relatable I noticed which did NOTHING to ease my nerves because like damn I'd honestly do the same stupid thing, seriously. Damned stupid hidan and his charming face.
But the END - oh the end..
I had expected him to just go on his merry way and no one would be the wiser but he actually gave the poor girl some thought after killing her and jeez that finishing quote was just the cherry on top; seriously amazing little fic
Kurogane Tsubasa chapter 1 . 3/4/2015
Oh my gosh. Do you know how scared I was to read this chapter because you posted the genre as horror? I thought that something way worse was going to happen and I nearly freaked out and almost stopped reading this I was that scared. I thought that Hidan would go on a rampage and she would be describing how he looked and there was blood everywhere. Thank goodness you didn't do that. I loved your story so much and I had a wonderful time reading it. .
Proper the Incredible chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
I LOVED this one. You're a damn genius. Too bad you never mentioned the baker daughter's name.
Feukat chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
Damn, I saw this in your profile. Didn't read the genre until she said "Holy ground" and I was getting a little suspicious.
I completely identified with the girl, too, and I was thinking "Aw, it's a fic where Hidan's a nice guy." Felt vaguely AU, too.
Then he killed her and I'm like- oh. No, Hidan's still a killer.
bb chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
great writing. i thought it wouldve been better if the end had been more violent and gory. hidan seemed to soft. i pitied the virgin girl but dang she was kinda dumb... its one thimg being innocent and chaste. its another thing being seduced so easily and taking off with a random bar stranger and giving up your virginity cuz hes the first guy that ever spoke to you. pathetic girl, really.
Lunthemerry chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
Oh wow...that was...DAYUM. o.o

Please excuse my language, I'm just in shock right now. When I started reading this I didn't pay attention to the genre, and about half-way through the story I got an uncomfortable feeling in my gut so I scrolled upwards and read the genre label.

Well, this story did leave me horrified. Only really good fics can evoke such emotion from me... Kudos to you, firefly.
Glitterthorn chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
I feel silly reviewing this because it's so far back. But it's really good. Seriously. Moved me to tears, almost. Poor girl... I hope she really did go to heaven.
Dr. Stilla Live chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
The part where I started whispering, "He's gonna kill you!" was right around after they met. I thought it would be more of a total bloodbath thing, but it had a really nice ending. Hidan's nicer than we thought~
p00piehead chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
This is story is freaking fantastic! I miss potty-mouth Hidan, though I guess it's hard to be suave when you're cursing continually.

Keep up the great work!
shelwyn chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
Was this really your first Hidan fic? It is a very good one.
BlessedMasochist chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
Another one... I don't know why I like these kind of fics so much.
Dark Angel of Pain and Chaos chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
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