Reviews for Pain |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw!Roxas and Axel! So... true! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The first boss battle. Although I don't think this is what Axel was thinking based on the dialogue this was well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Deep and stirring despite the briefness. I can even tolerate the slight ero in the moment. That is what makes good writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was too short. Nothing happened, just a pointless mesh of words. You probably would have had me hooked with just a little more. :/ Anyway, I like the idea. Could be the start of something amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I remember, at the very beginning of KH2 (actually, I only really played the beginning of KH2... up until you meet that wizard guy. Mickey's advisor?)you have to fight Axel as Roxas. And hahaha I totally pwned him! Ahem. This... actually was sort of an unexpected pairing. I always thought Roxas should be with... er, Namine or Seifer. I know, I'm weird... Seifer really awesome. Axel... I feel so terrible for him. I don't even know why... he always seems to be in a awful position in life. Poor guy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so awesome! I love it very much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is AMAZING! It's so short and to the point, but still it's perfectly written. Good job! -L0v3Ly |