Reviews for Pain
Azamiko chapter 1 . 11/27/2007
RollDee4 chapter 1 . 10/31/2006
aw!Roxas and Axel! So... true!
Story Weaver1 chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
The first boss battle. Although I don't think this is what Axel was thinking based on the dialogue this was well done.
Sheo Darren chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
Deep and stirring despite the briefness. I can even tolerate the slight ero in the moment. That is what makes good writing.
Kerigan chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
It was too short. Nothing happened, just a pointless mesh of words. You probably would have had me hooked with just a little more. :/ Anyway, I like the idea. Could be the start of something amazing.
pinkythesnowman chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
I remember, at the very beginning of KH2 (actually, I only really played the beginning of KH2... up until you meet that wizard guy. Mickey's advisor?)you have to fight Axel as Roxas. And hahaha I totally pwned him! Ahem.

This... actually was sort of an unexpected pairing. I always thought Roxas should be with... er, Namine or Seifer. I know, I'm weird... Seifer really awesome.

Axel... I feel so terrible for him. I don't even know why... he always seems to be in a awful position in life. Poor guy.
Trenchcoatgirl-Kyo chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
This was so awesome! I love it very much!
Axel'sHipsDon'tLie chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
This is AMAZING!

It's so short and to the point, but still it's perfectly written. Good job!