Reviews for Take My Breath Away
TrixieNancy124 chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Sweet! Pity they were sibings, they make a good pair! :)
thunderings chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
This was really sweet! I loved how Peter and Susan met on the bridge! Very romantic indeed!

Suggestion; watch your grammer here and there. Also, I don't know if they would've had jeans and v-neck shirts in the 1940's. :)
DCMotta chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
That was REALLY good. That story took my breath away. I don't know how, but it reminded me of the movie Titanic because their love could never be and yet they sneak off together anyway.
10 write 20 goto 10 chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
wow, that was awesome...speechless
DaughterofAthena87 chapter 1 . 1/23/2008
Cute! I loved it! ~KissingMercury
Ray08 chapter 1 . 12/18/2006
I like this story because it is just such a sweet story
K. Coco Pray-Iezzi chapter 1 . 8/11/2006
I love it. it's really good
More Than You Can Handle chapter 1 . 8/11/2006

i also can't believe that i reviewed two of your stories right after the other. :D

but this is so cute.

Queen Tabitha Tall chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
Great writing, but...I'm sorry, the incest grosses me out
Just A Little Bit Dramatic chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
Hey, I really love it! It's awesome! And, still would've been, had it been the other two, regardless. Lol. But I love it!

Anyone who flamnes can expect a bad reply from me too!
marieken chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
Beautiful, I just told you (:
Recycled Paper Addict chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
I Love it. Keep up the good work.

Lots of Love

Dont-Stop-Believin chapter 1 . 8/7/2006

Very awsome, and very sweet!. Awsome job!. You really have a talent!.As I said, very awsome, keep up the great work. btw, I updated.

You rule,

KibumiWong chapter 1 . 8/7/2006

that was so sweet! you rock!

I love all your peterxsusan!


well see ya!

take care

caithzadz chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
that was really sweet!
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