Reviews for Red on White
kajasame chapter 1 . 2/4
so touching ;_; I really love it, so simple yet beautiful

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justsimplymeagain chapter 1 . 12/12/2007
Wow, this was amasing. I'm simply wowed by this story. Fitting for the anime, being that it's main course is death, and a solemn aura in that. I would say that you should write a sepual to this story, with someones input about Tsuzuki's visiting of his grave (like Tatsumi's, Watari's or even Hisoka's) or about Muraki as a kid seeing a glimpse of Tsuzuki solemn visit to his grave, but that would take away from the story wouldn't it? I think it would dispite the fact that it would be interesting (the Muraki visiting as a kid one) unless you manage to pull it off being that your the author of this wonderful fanfic. My personal favorite part besides all of it is "No one notices him because no one notices the dead."

Anyway, excellent story...
GuardianLadySkye chapter 1 . 3/29/2007
This is an amazing fic. I have fallen in love with your writing style! You have a very good grasp on the personalities of Muraki and Tsuzuki, and you did an amazing job with this! It was just the right amount of love between them. Not too over-the-top, not too little, just right! You have inspired me to write a fic myself!

Now if I can just get my creativity to cooperate with me...;)

I really did enjoy this. It was perfect! I look forward to more of your writing!
Lady Psychic chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
This was a lovely little story and a well done Muraki/Tsuzuki fic!
Measured chapter 1 . 11/23/2006
This is beautiful and haunting and everything I could ask for in a Yami no Matsuei fanfic - the summary is such a gripping, if there could be awards for summaries alone I'd give one away (laugh)

The fic itself had so many beautiful moments, the imagery of Tsuzuki in winter and Muraki, the kiss, the lingering endings to each section such as "No one notices him because no one notices the dead." beautiful, just beautiful.
PerianArdocyl chapter 1 . 11/6/2006
Suge~! Though I feel slightly empty. :\

But still...suge~! -
snowpsyche chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
What a lovely little story. I especially liked the opening...it was spare and well written, and certainly grabbed me enough to finish your story. The idea of the intersection of the living and the dead has a lot of depth that you might explore in later fics, if you were inclined (hint hint). I enjoyed this and would definitely read more.
Yuki Valons chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
Wow...very well written, loved the setting! Would like it very much to see another story with this pairing! Keep up the good work!
Spinereader chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
Very appropriate setting for them. This was all so beautiful. Watch out for tense changes though. You had quite a few in there..
Jollyolly chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
Very lovely! As it's been stated before, it is hard to find decent Muraki/Tsuzuki fics..thanks for being one of them!

Will there be a continuation with this one?
Sushi.Squisher chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
I really liked this fic! It was absolutely gorgeous!
Literary Eagle chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
Sometimes it's quite difficult to find a really good Muraki/Tsuzuki fic, so this was a true joy to read. Thank you so much for writing this! _
Shishi chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
Dear, I love the tone. The way you narrate this makes it different from other stories out there and part of your work, making it not just another fanfic on just another site, but a story by Cho. (eeps, sentence abuse). The image of Tsuzuki just lying like a corpse against the gravestone of Muraki's grandfather is beautiful and clear, and the last sentence just hurt, it was so sad.

(Psst: You want to make this porn, yes you do.)
GreyGranian chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
Great! I just love to see MurTsu fics... There are too few of those...
Lady Black Cat chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
Very interesting. Are you planning to write another chapter? I hope so, b/c we need more MurxTsu fanfics.

Thanks for writing!