|Reviews for Of Shadows and Broken Dreams|
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 5/16
This was absolutely beautiful. You are an incredible writer! The galaxy has been so cruel to Obi wan... Forcing him to become a stoic Jedi... Losing Qui Gon... Watching the world crumble...
You captured the moment perfectly. Amazing job!
| Sue Clover chapter 1 . 4/14/2015
Ow. Oh, the feels.
| Obiwan456 chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
Heartbreaking. I wish this kind of grief could have been shown more in the movies, but I guess Lucas wanted a more stoic Jedi, but to me, this is more realistic. I know the Obi-wan of the movies was grieving, but couldn't we have seen a little more of it than was shown? You showed it beautifully. ~Obi's Mom
| FearOfDeathIsIllogical chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
A great story. Very good.
| Isis the Sphinx chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
These one shot you write are so good they make me want to cry. They make perfect sense, and the introspection gives a better view, a more detailed on than the movie did. Keep writing!
| Mark Solo chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
Poor, poor, poor, Obi Wan, angst, yes there is a lot of angst. A great little story and you truly feel sorry for Obi Wan and the rest of the galaxy as a whole, the next thiry or more years are going to be filled with war and death before some resemblens to peace comes to the galaxy (glares angry at post last command and those wong things) good writting, love it.
| AdrenalineRush chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
You were so right in putting "full of Obi-Wan angst" This fic was so bad! To Obi-Wan, not the writing. The writing, as usual, was superb. Horribly sad, wonderfully written. Beautful job. Grade: A
| Estel la Rodeuse chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
Oh your write so well...
A lovely piece of writing... Though very very sad and bitter.
| LA Suka chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
Poor Obi-Wan, it's tragic what he goes through. You did a good job writing this, thanks!
| littleoracle chapter 1 . 9/6/2006
don't know why i never saw this piece before. awesome work!
i love how you used Obi-Wan's interior thoughts to offset the angsty physical pain he was going through.
I will be Obi-Wan then... I have no other choice.
ugh. great stuff.
| Luthien and Tari Oronar chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
That was so sad. :'(