|Reviews for No Time To Rest|
| machievelli chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
Supposed to have been posted 5 May 2012, at and the Coruscant Entertainment Center in my The Critic's Two Cents. but I had problems with my computer that literally made every document and link hidden, and flaked on attaching these reviews to the original story threads for the last year. Everyone say; 'Mach is a flake, Mach is a yo-yo'. Better yet (Waves hand) 'Mach is trying, but he's still a flake'. Then to make me even more like a buttermilk biscuit (more flaky) my computer went down again in June of 2012 with yet another virus. So this is even later...
KOTOR over Rakata Prime: The Ebon Hawk fights for her life
The piece was short, and confusing. The lead up to the battle scene made little sense, and the delay in manning the weapons even less.
| Female Meatbag chapter 1 . 9/13/2006
I'm sorry that I don't have much of a critique, it was just really well written. Very good job - I don't give out compliments that easily :0)
| Queenofinsanity chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
wonderful. I'd love to read some more about Naomi *hint hint*