Reviews for Loss
Cutter12 chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
Oh, that was way too sad. :(

Well written but, way too sad. (sniff)
WuHaoNi chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
Well, that's depressing. Glad I read it though, it's well written.
simanis chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
Think you should have a 2nd chapter...

1) Alan woke up in a hospital after some drunk driver plough into his car and it was all a very very bad dream.

2)Alan sleeping with his crossword and the words he solved before going to sleep were: coffins, accident, disfigured.

3)Alan keeping virgil at the hospital were Don and Charlie were involved in a car accident and he had this horrible dream.

etc etc. lol!
Sarai chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
Good story.
A Thing For Brothers chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
You killed BOTH of them? Gee wiz! How cruel can you be? LOL This was way too sad for my taste, but it was still good. I just don't like that you killed my favorite characters!
RiderOfRohan3019 chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
that was sad. I cried at the end.
Synbou chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
Another powerful story. That was sad, but very well done.
Elysium1996 chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
i so have to kill you now for making me cry... :P
luvnumb3rs chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
Very sweet.
Taura Callisto chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
Oh my goodness, that made me tear up at the end. How sad, poor Alan, to lose both his sons and then not get to see them. You did a very good job at portraying the emotions of the event.
PattyW chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
Oh my, sad but very well done. If Don had to die, I think

I'd have preferred he die in the line of duty with Charlie at

his side but that's just me. Heck, it's YOUR story.

My compliments to Aunt Irene! She came through for the family

when it really counted.
Shichan Goddess chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
Amazing-had tears in my eyes.