I spent a week almost obsessively reading this book. It made me laugh. It made me cry. It made me want to walk through the pages of the book so I could join in the action. I have a few thoughts about it that I want to mention here:

1. Young children are extremely hard to write. Their innocence yet mischievousness. Their inability to understand important events yet their desire to want to help anyways. I’ve reads many books where writers try so hard yet fail at it anyways.
You, however, nailed it. Sara and Sandra were one of my favorite parts of this book. Their speech, their mannerisms, everything. One of my favorite scenes was in the chapter, “How Not to Babysit a Skywalker”, when Sara and Sandra were describing their father to Lando. It made me smile so much. You managed to capture two twin two-year olds perfectly.

2. Your dialogue is beautiful. I’m a nut for things like that, and it made me overjoyed to read the interchanges between characters and their internal dialogue.

3. You captured Han Solo perfectly. I could imagine a slightly younger version of Harrison Ford delivering each and every line.

4. I am a mixture of a visual and verbal reader (I see the action and hear the words spoken by the character as I’m reading). For me, reading your book was like watching one of my favorite movies. Your descriptiveness helped me to hear the characters clearly and see the action play out in their surroundings.

There are so many more things I loved about this story as well. I would like to thank you for pouring so many hours into writing this, as I know how hard writing can be— and on top of that, your author’s notes made it sound like life was keeping you very busy. I could tell how much energy and time you put into this.
I will definitely be coming back for a reread of this again and again. Thank you for sharing your work with me and with others.

wow I'm literally crying what a perfect ending in every way... Im really emotional right now! I absolutely loved this story. The amount of work that you put into it is so admirable, thank you thank you a thousand times for writing this. Honestly don't know what to do with myself now! ahhh... tearing up! Now i need to go look at your other stories before I start proper weeping!

this is such a fantastic finale sequence, Im on the edge of my seat ooooomg!

old wheezy... im dead You write the best Han I've ever read!

my goodness I can't put this story down aaaaaahhhhh!

This chap made me laugh soooo much hahaha I am loving this story and how you write the children's POVs with the troll from hell lmao!

It took me a little while to get into this story but holy kriff! I'm so glad I kept reading, I cant put it down! I am loving it and the plot is really unpredictable, I dont know what will happen and its exciting! Also I loooove how you write from Han's POV, it makes me laugh out loud. cant wait to read on thank you so much for writing this,
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Great read so far hope see more if this not the end consider threats may come later .plus pretty sure with cloning technology can clone some limbs ,skin and organs so be better off .

Be safe depend what force want Becuase safe not alway in plans .

Chance through away the politics and constant war to spend time kids see that as no brainier choice .

Feel sorry for captain .

Consider one more connect force now was when he was alive old troll should listen some more .

A friendly face ,that he nows ,that he close to and ship he likes a home that flies .

Slow and easy like handling a scare and abused animal best Vader .

I was wondering how you'd end this behemoth of a story, but I hadn't thought of this. More fool me. Its perfect. Thank you for the gift that this epic has been; its thoroughly diverted me for almost two days straight.