iI will say this once – women are a dangerous proposition, son. I got married and brought down two galactic governments as a result./i

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I don't think you can put that ALL on Padme, my guy

God, I love Leia.

Oh man, poor Lando. He tries to do the right thing and ends up with Vader's kidnapped offspring.

Fantastic work! Made for an awesome read :) especially liked that you were able to convey so much occurring at the same time, with different plots and plans interacting. Very nice!

oh man, Luke will be...thrilled... when he finds out he's actually got three sisters lmao

lmao, poor luke is gonna smell so girly! Luke and Han's friendship is so cute BTW 3 And I almost feel sorry for Anakin, having to figure out how to deal with a teenager lol

loving this story so far! poor Luke needs hugs! suggestion for some point in the futurewith how much you've improved over the years in writing toddler dialogue, it would be awesome if you tweaked sara and Sandra's dialogue in this story to be more realistic for their age.

dun dun dun... sigh. and here I have to leave it for the night, because sleep. It cracks me up that at all of 16, Han is convinced that Luke is the only kid in their duo. 16 year olds seem so much younger from the other side of 30 lol. Also, Vader with toddlers will never not be adorable.

aw I was kinda hoping han and Luke would be friends by now. so...dumb new to the fandom question, what's the EU?

Wow! This was amazing. I loved how you worked all the characters into an original story. I still don't understand how the Emperor didn't know Han wasn't Force sensitive. But that is a minor detail. You are a great storyteller. This was a perfect blend of action, drama, humor, ect... Well done!

...Well, death would be too short and easy a punishment, wouldn't it?
This chapter's banter though... I stand by my assessment that half of this is utter controlled crack.

Okay, had to comment here.
This fic, was a whole longfic worth of 'WOW' and 'WHAT' and 'WHAT IS THIS,' and there were parts where I was pretty sure this was a crack fic in disguise. - One that I enjoyed and smashed through in less than 4 days. Then that final act happened and I was fully, FULLY brought back to the fact that this was a serious Star Wars fic. With the appropriate death tolls.
And then I arrived at this chapter, and now I would like to express my complete and unabridged appreciation to the amount of FEELS this story has incited within me.
I mean, WOW.

ha a leverage reference good show

PIETT NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. PALPATINE YOU BASTARD!

I just finished. I spent all day reading it. It was so good. I loved the end where the imperials and rebels team up to take down the death star. And I loved vadars interactions with his children. This was such a great fanfiction.