|Reviews for Through The Gate|
| Krisaku chapter 11 . 3/1
I AM SO THANKFUL to you for writing a fanfic like this because I really wanted That the movie Shamballa have a continuation on what happened to winry but I'd never thought that you'll make Winry go to the other gate as well and meet her alternate self. I'm like "OMG an alternate Winry!" , Winry here, in your story, in really great I love how she never give up on her life and be a prostitute just to have Eddie a good life, an I'm happy that you have ED and Win a happy ending :))) so WELL DONE for you
| lilythemastoria chapter 1 . 2/7
Very depressing... The FEELS, though. When Wendy died and the evil guy was like Sleep with me or you're fired, I was like crying...
| jaclynkaileigh chapter 11 . 7/10/2013
This was incredible you are truly a fanatic author. If you ever write a book let me know because I want to buy a copy. I don't know a way to explain everything this story made me feel. The whole spectrum of emotions though we throughly roused as any great story does!
| jaclynkaileigh chapter 10 . 7/10/2013
"Wendy Elric?" Ed asked, feeling pleased for some reason he couldn't identify...
Omg I don't think there are words for how this is making me feel right now. I am creepily in love with this story it's amazing. I love post CoS fics but this one is really wow. The lyrics to that song we'd perfect btw and I love the Phantom of the Opera so well done.
| jaclynkaileigh chapter 9 . 7/10/2013
Omfgomfgomfgomfg! I'm freaking out right now this is amazing and awesome and Holy shit. I wonder if Ed will know it's the real Winry right off the bat. According to Wendy he should if he loves her!
| jaclynkaileigh chapter 8 . 7/10/2013
This is breaking my heart. Where the hell is Ed?
| jaclynkaileigh chapter 7 . 7/10/2013
Damn whata creep, good for her. I would've busted his nose too.
| jaclynkaileigh chapter 6 . 7/10/2013
Holy shit man how can you do this to me, this is so sad. Excellent writer that is what you are.
| jaclynkaileigh chapter 5 . 7/10/2013
Omfg! I knew it the coughing was bad news Holy shit. This is awful plus I wondered how long two doppelgangers could possibly not cancel each other out for. She was meant to pass away when Winry arrived just like the other Ed. Omg this is awful. Love the Roy/Liza part.
| jaclynkaileigh chapter 4 . 7/10/2013
I love Winry's position and the Virgin bit that is perfect!I'm so worried how Wendy will take in what Winry tells her especially if she tells her about Ed.
| jaclynkaileigh chapter 3 . 7/10/2013
Wow Wendy's story is so sad! Similarities? I think so. I wonder if Winry had told her about Edward Elric? Very interesting.
| jaclynkaileigh chapter 2 . 7/10/2013
Oooo this is so great so far! Love that she ran right into her doppelganger and Ed's child doppelganger as well!
| Gxmwp-Arisa chapter 11 . 9/8/2012
I'm so happy you made this! This was such a good story and I'm glad someone final thought about Winry! Usually on boards or in real life people say how good the ending was(including CoS), but they never really mention Winry and when I do then the usual response is "what about her?" Like seriously!? I hate how most people think so little about her 3 she's actually my favourite character. How many people have you heard say that?
| Gxmwp-Arisa chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Well from this first chapter I can tell that this'll be my only like canon story xP
| imafuckingusername.dealwithit chapter 11 . 9/8/2012
I absolutely loved it. The ending was a kind of nostalgic happiness, though, rather than joy. But I still liked it; it was more real than the overly cliche endings that remind everyone of Mary-sues and other such unsavory things.
You're a taleted writer, but I had to note that the ending seemed a tad rushed: reuniting with Ed, marrying etc all in two chapters, then an epilogue. Though I am satisfied with the ending, I feel it was all kind of half-hearted and cobbled together. It would have been nicer had you fleashed it out as much as the rest of the story.
Oh well, I still give a four star rating!
Thanx for writing,