Awesome fight scene. I liked the way you changed point of view, from excerpts from the book to what happened. It makes the reading interesting. Keep up the good work!

glowingnarya

I loved the part with 'Heaven' in it. The last bit was very lyrical. Beautiful.

Is Sasuke going to get to read the book? His reaction would be interesting if nothing else.

Keep up the good work. :)

glowingnarya

OH my GOSH! MOMO! he called Zabuza, the DEMON of the BLOODY MIST, MOMO! I think I'm about to die laughing.

Soul...hmm, the name's fitting. The hokage's the heart of the village. Their leader, encouragement... nice name. Keep up the good work! :)

glowingnarya

You got Kakashi's character down well. I can totally see him rapping the book in the orange cover for appearances sake. Heh. So funny. This is getting more interesting by the chapter. So, Naruto knew Hanabi. Interesting. The plot thickens, dun dun dun!

Love your writing, keep up the good work :)

glowingnarya

Wow...I...am...sucked..in. Excellent writing. It flows well. This is definitely going to be an enjoyable read if the first two chapters are anything to go by.

So, I'm guessing that this is in the time period after he went training with Ero-Sennin, but who else is he traveling with? just curious. Keep up the good work. :)

glowingnarya

BUT WHO ARE THE OTHER TWO! I'm re-reading this (or more like skimming over since I only just finished it) and I can't for the life of me think who the other two are. At first I thought it was Sasuke and Sakura but they're back in the village. I wonder if it's Haku? Oh for the love of the gods! Update!

"Lee then jumped to his feet shouting how he was going to find Gai-sensei so that they may absorb Naruto’s youthful tales together."

God I laughed incessantly at that part. I love Lee.

This story is absolutely spellbinding. Right in the gizzard eye-popping. Fall over backwards mind-blowing. I can't describe it well enough.

Please update this soon. It's way too good to end there!

PLEASE UPDATE! Soon! I'm dying waiting for Neji's scene... pretty please with sugar on top? I'll give you a cookie...

This is amazing. Please update soon, I can't wait for some more insights. Thanks for translating some of the names. I've been googling them.

Perhaps you could translate some of them for other people. I don't like not knowing stuff like that. Especially when I know it's some sort of in-joke.

So thanks for an amazing story. I look forward to the next instalment.

hey I am rereading STF because it's badass and I have a quick question:

“Don’t worry, Asuma, I guess I can share Kurenai-chan with you… now, that I got my new playmate…”

is Anko's new playmate Naruto?

I must say, this is an incredible piece of work. I am looking forward to the rest.

Oh My God, I am in love with this story. Its so poignant and real. Its Smart!Naruto without being super!Naruto. I love it,.

Please update soon...!

VERY interesting. In many ways. I look forward to more.

This has to be the greatest story I have ever red and felt such emotions for you must continued this story

I was reading your uptake of JonnyG's Ice Princess of Konohoa, and absolutely loved the improvements. However, i feel this work is better of the two and cannot wait until it is complete. I expect you to be busy, but I figured I ought to let you know this is the most emotional story I have ever read on .