Quite blatant signs of the author make me wonder if the pseudonym is really needed. It's so obvious... People aren't THAT idiotic, you know.

One of the best and by far most creative Naruto story I've ever had the pleasure of reading. It saddens me that it has not been updated for so long..

Such a moving story. It really is a beautiful take on the Naruto verse. I can only hope that you will some day come back to add to it. Not many manage to alter and add a true depth to the Naruto from canon. Many are happy to just see him at face value and I thank you for helping me to see him as more of a person and not just a character. You have made a wonderful story and I can only hope that your original inspiration for this will someday return. If not, then I will consider myself lucky if I encounter your work in real life, beyond fanfiction.

Going good so far, I must see more!

I know you have prob moved on well past this story but I hope you come back and finish it

that was the most riveting fanfic i have ever read:'(.

its very good please keep writing

I can tell you now that I am In love with this story. When it ends the book should say something like and yet I may be the failure to whom will see another day. As in life we all fail but true strenght dose not come from acsepting but fighting what you know isn't right. Or something to say that it was just his first book.

hi!

i really like this story! D naruto has the hyuuga smirk

one thing i have noticed, is that in the beginning, there were plenty of grammar and spelling mistakes. maybe you could look them over? i think it's really disheartening if such a good story such as this one gets all these spelling mistakes TT

please update soon!

Yours is one of the first stories I read when I found this site in 2008. I find myself checking every six months or so to see if there has been an update, who knows maybe the writing bug will bite you again!

I must say that I am very impressed with you style of writing and how you entwine the story with "flashbacks" continue as you do and I have little doubt you will be a very popular writer here on FF. though your chapters could be a little longer I must say they are long enough for it to be a good read.

wow like the way the story is written pleas keep uP the work

O_O OMG Please update! I love this story so far its so origional. I cant wait to find out what happens next in the book and how they all take it! Then when Naruto finally comes home! Gah! Update please!

this is my favorite naruto fanfic i have ever read. the way you put his life into words is beautiful and bitter sweet. at one moment it makes my heart hurt and at the next makes me laugh. please i beg you, please update your story.

you know, im not the only one to track you down simply buy decrypting your profile page, so please update befpre the ineveteble happepns( not a threat)