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This is one of the absolute best fics I've ever read! I love it~ I like your writing style here, and how you decided to put the story to paper - or screen as it is. It's a very common idea that can be found in the Naruto fandom (Naruto having a mask and being stronger than he really is), and you've set yours apart from the rest. I can't say exactly how, because I can't explain it, but... Anyway, another thing I like is how you have to differing (even if it is only by a little) writing styles. One for the true narrative, and the other is Naruto's. And also how you reveal the contents of the book. It's in a vague sort of order, and sometimes you skip to far ahead then go back to where you were (or skip back), but it's flowing in really well.

In the first few chapters there were some errors in your wording, so I'd advice you to reread it to check. Also, Can you please update? Please? I know you're probably getting alot of this already from others, but it's just that I absolutely love this story, and while the idea is kinda cliche, the way you write it makes it stand out from the rest. It has so many moods to it, and I don't doubt that it could make me cry if ever, but...Please just don't discontinue it! It's too good and awesome to be thrown away...

Good story so far, keep up the awesome work

Just reread your story. Love it. Really wish you'd continue it. Know it takes inspiration and has been a long time so it would be hard to restart it...but this story needs to be finished. Just amazing. Even if it takes another couple years, hope to see more of this.

Awww, I really wanted to see Kyu's names for Ibiki and the sound trio, please, write some more :(

WRITE! Totally awesome! Totally awesome! Except... "threw" wrong word, you use the wrong word, other than that, AWESOME!

Great story...it must continue.

Please update.

Anko Mitarashi, why am I somehow not surprised?

The Chuunin exams, that will be a heap of joy indeed.

Tempest is a fitting nick-name.

I'm enjoying this deeper look into Naruto Uzumaki, but it seems to be like he's self-pitying himself a bit much.

I know he has plenty of reason too but it just doesn't seem like him.

Naruto seems more like the kind of guy who just gets on with things.

But still, it's your story.

Update soon!

I love it! I even cried a bit in some places. Nice work! Till next time!

I almost wish that 'Kyu Ninja Chronicles' would be published in our world. I know I'd buy a copy or two.

For now though, I'm just eager for more! I can't wait to see what happens next!1

-Shodaime Shisarakage-

a class 1 story when can we expext a update again mate.

Wow, wow and wow! This fic is mind-blowing, fantastic..a masterpiece. After reading The Ice Princess of Konoha..another fic which is amazing by the way...I wanted to try something else written by you and guess what I found...a fic that I come across time and time again but for one reason or another I never read...

Usually I am a bit reticent of reading fics that are written using the first person... Not only you managed outstandingly well to write a story in a story in a captivating way but also managed to change the scene smoothly without having to announce the reader which is a skill that not many writers can claim to have especially here on . (I can count on one hand such writers and I have been reading fics for over 5 years).

By the way...I noticed that you hadn't updated in a long, long time but maybe you can tell us in an author note whether or not this story is going to be continued? *puppy eyes*

Hey there,

I love what you've written so far and I hope to see more of it.

...Hopefully before the mob gathers and starts looking for you.

A wonderful story. I expect to see more of it.