|Reviews for A Fleeting Memory|
| Child of Dreams chapter 74 . 3/31/2016
So is Laure pregnant again?
| Child of Dreams chapter 69 . 3/31/2016
It'a Aminta, not Amnita.
| Child of Dreams chapter 49 . 3/31/2016
Is Clare bipolar?
| CalmReader chapter 74 . 1/3/2016
This fanfic is the reason why I don't really like E/C stories. I think, that with OC Erik becomes more interesting. I loved Laure with all my heart! She's precious. I'm really tired of reading about Erik's lessons with Christine. So I'm happy to discover your great story.
I loved everything about it, the structure and different POVs. And most of all - the idea of Erik's grown-up son. That was brilliant. I loved, how you portrayed Nicolas - he is like Erik's alter ego, but more perfect and loved for sure.
As for Erik, I haven't realized, that you were picturing Gerard Batler's version of him, until you'd written about it in your note a couple chapters before. I imagined more Leroux's Erik, but with one-half mask. I don't mind him being half-handsome (no, not at all). But of course I felt something new about him throughout the story. He is definitely less mysterious and more human in your imagination. His character absorbes the warm air of Persia and Corsica. And his skin is warm :-)
Laure is a gem. I loved everything about her. But most of all - her attitude towards Erik. Her respect for his nature. And for his mask. I actually liked, that she didn't want to take his mask off, this thought was not her idee-fixe.
What Erik thinks about Christine - is 100% my thoughts too. That's why I can't picture them together and always search for OCs or OOC Christines :-)
Thank you for the story! And I'm heading to sequel right now ;-)
| Bergamotte chapter 74 . 7/29/2013
A Fleeting Memory is an amazing tale; I couldn't put it down. I fell in love with this Erik, his Laure, and their brilliant son. Congratulations, Iamphantomgirl, for this spellbinding piece of writing. I'm going to read every piece of POTO fiction you've posted. Thanks for the story.
| Veronica chapter 52 . 6/22/2013
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| Phantom Night Owl chapter 74 . 1/28/2012
I really loved this story...so well done. Your OC Laure, was charming, and a great fit for Erik...I liked the fact that she came before Christine; I also loved the way you handled Erik's obsession with Christine...short and over quickly once Laure and Nicolas came back into his life. It was amusing the way you portrayed Christine...sort of a dim bulb, wasn't she? I'm glad this didn't become a triangle like so many OW stories end up...it was fun, touching, and very sexy. Looking forward to reading the sequel.
| Loretta Lolita chapter 5 . 5/4/2011
hot... but i hate you refused to describe the actual deed considering it was a the huge turning point.
| musicalkilljoy chapter 74 . 3/20/2011
I loved your story! Thank u! x
| SerengetiRose chapter 74 . 12/25/2010
Great story. I will read the sequel.
| Timeflies chapter 74 . 2/28/2010
Wow! Erik did push them away! I shall go find your sequel. This was very good. Thanks.
| Timeflies chapter 73 . 2/28/2010
A man admitting his mistakes can only feel unworthy, unloved. Reading on.
| Timeflies chapter 72 . 2/28/2010
She has a right to give him that time, but he made a commitment to love her and he must unhold that promise. Reading on.
| Timeflies chapter 71 . 2/28/2010
It doesn't matter who you thought was Erik, I alway have Gerard Butler in my sites. No matter who's story I read that is who I see. Yes, a young Butler would be drool worthy. Reading on.
| Timeflies chapter 70 . 2/28/2010
He knows the boy is safe, but his intention wasn't known. Raoul made mince meat of the lair. LOL... Reading on.