Reviews for Nightmares & Dreams A WPBA forum Challenge
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 8/18/2006
Poor Lizzie! The nightmare sounds horrible! But it really shows what Elizabeth is afraid of. Great writing! I loved the dream! John and Lizzie! I hope you write dream about. (Maybe John or Rodney next!) This is a really good chapter! You ended the chapter really really well!
panddora chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
Wow, that was great. Thanks
SpecialAgentJim chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
Wow...this was I really enjoyed reading this. I liked the emotional contrast between Elizabeth's two dreams. It's amazing what a single mind can produce in a single night when it's under stress.

I liked the sense of irony in the first dream. And that second one was really a nightmare! Kolya, the Wraith and John dying all in the same dream. Poor Elizabeth! No wonder she screamed at the end. I think I'd scream, too.

Anyway, now that I've read this, it makes me really want to try this challenge, too!


Reefgirl chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
Good stuff, really good