Reviews for Atton's worst nightmare
machievelli chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
Supposed to have been posted 5 May 2012, at and the Coruscant Entertainment Center in my The Critic's Two Cents. but I had problems with my computer that literally made every document and link hidden, and flaked on attaching these reviews to the original story threads for the last year. Everyone say; 'Mach is a flake, Mach is a yo-yo'. Better yet (Waves hand) 'Mach is trying, but he's still a flake'. Then to make me even more like a buttermilk biscuit (more flaky) my computer went down again in June of 2012 with yet another virus. So this is even later...

TSL aboard Ebon Hawk: Atton has a seriously off day

The piece is light, and unfortunately was not as amusing as the author might have hoped. Still haven't figured out where dancing with squirrels had to do with it..
Fall Out Guirl chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
How fantastic! I have never read a story better in my entire life! Bravo, bravo! I enjoy your sugar-highness. Keep writing these...interesting stories..