Reviews for Old Business
gen x chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
Not bad.
DreamingOfMyGirl chapter 1 . 12/3/2007
interesting. never saw the series of read them, but these characters do seem to click.

~dreamer
thames chapter 1 . 12/7/2006
It needs some work. I'd suggest a rewrite
Excel chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
You need to put more action and gunfire in a gunsmith cats fanfic.
Ess Tii Eph Yu chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
A boring and uneventful bit of revenge, a few paragraphs of meaningless small talk that might as well be about the weather for all the interest it garners, and then they go to have a dance that the reader isn't privileged enough to actually see. Certainly a work well worthy of your literary legacy.
cooking babe chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
this was cool. I hope you'll write some more.