Reviews for Eight |
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![]() ![]() Wonderful! Thank you so much. |
![]() ![]() Well done. HP got books, the slimy tosser got tossed, and SS and HP got a hearty laugh - and neighbors who know magic! Perfect! |
![]() ![]() If you got complaints about McG's being OOC, you can ignore them. She joined the abominable Dumbles in aiding, abetting, and always believing the revolting Marotters (perfect sobriquet from Alethea27) for seven everlasting years as they repeatedly tortured and even tried to murder Snape. I can easily believe she caned both boys and intentionally hit harder and ever harder when each was silent. The kindest interpretation I can possibly imagine for her behavior over all those years is that Dumbles potioned or spelled her into joining in on his biased cruelties. |
![]() ![]() Lovely; HP has a friend as well as "My Snape." Progress should speed up a bit from here even though it won't be uniform. Excellent writing. |
![]() ![]() Damn! I was hoping she'd talk to Snape before the unspeakable Dumbles horned in with more Snape-torture. |
![]() ![]() Finally the actual talk begins! Excellent portrayal of the situation all along. |
![]() ![]() Well, at least Snape isn't a mean drunk, and he told HP to go play. ... Not quite ready to believe SS would brew while drunk, though, too dangerous ... More misunderstanding since SS forgot he told HP to go out, but he seems finally to have twigged. |
![]() ![]() Proceeding nicely. I like the tailor: he ~asked~ instead of making an assumption. |
![]() ![]() Good start. You've shown the mutual misunderstanding well. I probably won't review extensively, too tired, but thank you for writing and posting this. Your hard work shows. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought that was little Princess. One of my favourite stories |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a great story. Well done. |
![]() ![]() what a breakthrough! |
![]() ![]() Eh, ok, tired of Snape repeatedly traumatizing an already traumatized kid. Not into child abuse. Moving on. |
![]() ![]() Feels so weird reading a story written so long ago that they actually thought Sirius had a trial, that Severus grew up elsewhere (how then did he meet Lily?) and that Lily was somehow a saint. Well-written, though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for writing and sharing your wonderful story. |