| Reviews for Eight |
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   B00kworm86 chapter 11 . 11/21/2024 Page has a lot of code and a little of the story that understandable I don’t know if it has the whole chapter in English or not just thought you should know so you can fix it. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/11/2024 Chapter 11 and 12 are unreadable. Type commands are scattered throughout. |
| crystalstar2314 chapter 11 . 7/6/2024 good story so far, but I'm not going to try to read this chapter, absolutely unreadable. on to a different story I guess |
| chuffed4angst chapter 21 . 2/15/2024 Really lovely story! |
| MintSprinkles chapter 11 . 10/14/2023 Chapter 11 and 12 are hard to read with all of the editing prompts included... |
| guest chapter 21 . 2/4/2023 Wonderful! Thank you so much. |
| guest chapter 18 . 2/4/2023 Well done. HP got books, the slimy tosser got tossed, and SS and HP got a hearty laugh - and neighbors who know magic! Perfect! |
| guest chapter 15 . 2/4/2023 If you got complaints about McG's being OOC, you can ignore them. She joined the abominable Dumbles in aiding, abetting, and always believing the revolting Marotters (perfect sobriquet from Alethea27) for seven everlasting years as they repeatedly tortured and even tried to murder Snape. I can easily believe she caned both boys and intentionally hit harder and ever harder when each was silent. The kindest interpretation I can possibly imagine for her behavior over all those years is that Dumbles potioned or spelled her into joining in on his biased cruelties. |
| guest chapter 12 . 2/4/2023 Lovely; HP has a friend as well as "My Snape." Progress should speed up a bit from here even though it won't be uniform. Excellent writing. |
| guest chapter 8 . 2/4/2023 Damn! I was hoping she'd talk to Snape before the unspeakable Dumbles horned in with more Snape-torture. |
| guest chapter 5 . 2/4/2023 Finally the actual talk begins! Excellent portrayal of the situation all along. |
| guest chapter 4 . 2/3/2023 Well, at least Snape isn't a mean drunk, and he told HP to go play. ... Not quite ready to believe SS would brew while drunk, though, too dangerous ... More misunderstanding since SS forgot he told HP to go out, but he seems finally to have twigged. |
| guest chapter 2 . 2/3/2023 Proceeding nicely. I like the tailor: he ~asked~ instead of making an assumption. |
| guest chapter 1 . 2/3/2023 Good start. You've shown the mutual misunderstanding well. I probably won't review extensively, too tired, but thank you for writing and posting this. Your hard work shows. |
| Rege chapter 17 . 12/1/2022 I thought that was little Princess. One of my favourite stories |