|Reviews for Eight|
| winterzstorm chapter 21 . 9/11
I loved this fic it was really sweet.
| Verity Grahams chapter 1 . 7/30
This chapter just dived right in there. The opening sequence doesn’t mess around, it gets right into Snape being Harry’s guardian. There are a lot of details that were glazed over, for me.
Some other things niggled me: usinginstead of the word ‘number’ and using 4 rather than four.
Choices you make regarding Snape and petunia knowing each other, Snape seemed to know her, but she seemed oblivious. I think this should be consistent.
There was more depth to the section in Harry’s PoV and that was a section I really enjoyed. I got a good sense of Harry, how he felt and it was used to explain Petunias ooc behaviour.
i actually like the change of POV, it can be a bit of a pet peeve for me. I like to be able to follow the story, and here you slip from one to the other, so I’m not missing anything, but gaining a new perspective.
You use a common trope for severitus, the idea that Snape takes Harry’s action from fear of abuse as defiance. It works well, particularly because of the changing POVs. It’s mildly comical for the reader too, not because you’ve written it that way, but because of the juxtaposition. Then you realise and it’s almost sad.
The chapter ends with me feeling eager to know how their views of the situation with finally come into alignment, which is good. I find myself wondering how Snape will adapt, and how will Harry learn he’s cared for.
Overall, a good start.
| DarkAngel chapter 21 . 7/20
Well done, though I usually don't like stories written in the first person POV but this was still a nice read. I loved the bits with Harry's imagination! But I'm also curious now that you mentioned writing a novel, why didn't you mention anything in your bio or given us the title to check out for ourselves? There's nothing wrong with advertising your original work, a lot of authors have done so.
I hope you are well and I would love if you completed "A Mutual Understanding"
| Sleepyhawk502 chapter 21 . 5/1
Great story! Thanks so much for sharing!
| Guest chapter 21 . 3/15
Wow I loved this story withball my heart. I accidently ended up here looking for Snarrys and this got me hooked. Masterpiece
| Guest chapter 21 . 3/10
I'm sad it's over, but it was amazing
| kasiaeliza chapter 21 . 3/3
Thanks for sharing ;p
I love all misunderstanding and how good you described Harry's reasoning and "training". It was sad but it read wonderfully.
Especially Snape transformation (or I rather should say, it was in him always, but he had buried it very deep) to caring and remembering from his own childhood parental figure.
| midnightnettle chapter 1 . 1/28
in case no one told you, this is my most
favorite fanfic of all time
| Boo chapter 21 . 12/24/2019
I loved this story so much. I binge read the whole thing in a single day. I love how well you portrayed Harry...all the stories I've read with him as a child have him acting so much older. This was so cute and I definitely did not cry, thank you very much.
| Guest chapter 13 . 12/4/2019
This is an awesome story!
I love how all the teachers have venom and berate Dumbledore
Thank you for gracing the world with such a wonderful story!
| Amnesic Reader chapter 21 . 10/9/2019
Awesome story! Sequel please!
| Valenti1965 chapter 21 . 3/11/2019
What a fabulous story. Loved it xxx
| dragonBug27 chapter 21 . 3/5/2019
Omg I loved this from beginning to end! To see growth re both Harry and Severus was just gold 3
| woozy.y chapter 5 . 1/16/2019
Chapter 5, bich im actually crying, and "I need somebodyDay6 isn't helping
| Guest chapter 21 . 11/30/2018
Wish there was more loved it