no offense but i've got say this ruined the story for me and i won't continue to read. why does this ''pregnancy twist'' happen in every other story? boring.

That's a cool set of exams.

That scene was hot. Wonder if there are more in the story.

Amazing piece of work here! Loved it. Only down side was the amount of usage of the word "whilst" but you fixed that lol. i applaud this work!

Sooooo good! Considering that you wrote this about ten years ago when there was very little info on Akatsuki, your imagination was quite exceptional :) I loved reading it!

man Deidara is so boring and weak and such a coward I mean a baby could beat him I hope Naruto rips him to pieces as well as Tobi/Obito because there both pathetic jokes anyway

well this is getting interesting

well this was nice but also sad can Naruto never catch a break lol

well this was an interesting chapter

nice chapter I'm guessing the special guest was the 41 year old

well this sure was an interesting chapter wonder when Shika will find out seems Akamaru has well I think he has wonder what Sakura will do and the next test should be fun

well this was nice love NaruSaku can't beat a good lemon if he dies he dies still it will totally suck if he dies it would be good for him to find out he's gonna be a dad or something but that would be even more sadder

seriously Naruto's awesome but he's also a total wanker he cares about everyone but himself makes him the most caring person even but the biggest wanker also he's trying to push the one girl he's always loved away and making Sasgay start over and now the girl likes him back he pushes her away such a dick head still great story can't wait for more the answer to a lemon is hell yea as long as it's NaruSaku of course

well this sure was interesting that was a great fight can't wait for more

well that was interesting so now Iruka knows man this sux