Noo I want it to stay like this !

Good chapters, a little short for my standart but well they are good ;)

Hum it's a good opening lol :p

this is a great Fic you really should expand it into a Squeal regarding Naruto's Reign as Hokage

Hey, My name is Nathan.

I just read your story and wanted to congradulate (sorry about spelling error) u on it. it definitely rates top ten on my list(and i've read several).

I was impressed with the story mostly because u did a good job not overdoing personalities such as Naruto's tendency to self-sacrifice.

I see why u did it for the story, but i didn't like naruto and sakura going straight from first kiss to in the sack. up to that point you had done a fantastic job of building their relationship from teammates to friends then to lovers, but that seemed unnaturally quick for me. but it's ur story so what the heck.

I also loved what you did with Gaara and how he kinda only opens up to Naruto. thought that was a nice touch.

in retrospect, i enjoyed the suprises you held until the end such as naruto's "finishing move" and the kyuubis deal explianation.

this is also one of the few stories where I have enjoyed the authors depiction of Sasuke. he is usually too much of a bastard for my liking, even the fics that show him returned to konoha. u did a great job of showing how he wants to change the legacy of the Uchiha and his commitment to Naruto.

Lastly, I'd be interested in a prequel as well to further describe orochimaru's downfall as well as itachi's. just seems like a good sidenote battle to go into further detail on.

again, thanks for the good story.

Nathan

goood

Good story.

I've decided to reread this fic after remembering about it. You know, looking at the Manga as it is now and your fic, it's amazing how much of the canon you were able to predict. Even though they're not 100% the same, it's still so very similar that it's almost as if you had a crystal ball and saw a blurry image glimpse of the future.

Madara being the main villain (even if the Akatsuki Leader turned out to be Pain), the Bijuu formerly being one greater being, Madara's plan to unite them all. Pretty good guess I'd say!

so sweet...*teardrops*

hmm, I do find myself slightly disappointed that Naruto will be using this wind jutsu instead of actual swords in combat in this story, but oh well, i'll get over it. But great work with this story so far though. I guess I personally view a few things differently, so I don't always agree with some dialogue and other things here and there, but I have been very intrigued with your fiction, and am enjoying it, so great job.

(Nice work on the summery by the way. It's short, but was very quick to grab my attention and begin reading)

wow this is a great story though to bad that the kyuubi was set free. anyway great job on this one love it very much.

Sorry but may I ask what jutsu did hirsute ask naruto no to use? I'm a bit confused. Anyone can enlighten me?

Naruto accomplished his dreams! I'm happy for him!

Are you writing a sequel? If you are, I'm really looking foward to it :)

One thing I got disturbed. They're all ninjas you know. I doubt all of them would cry hearing naruto's story. I don't know but all the rookies including Tsunade and Gaara cry was a bit too stinky for me.

I hope Sakura doesn't go after him. It's too dangerous for a pregnant woman. And Naruto will be mad if he finds out. I'm pretty sure Shikamaru and Sasuke will go.